|Reviews for Mobile Suit Gundam Alpha|
| Pirate King Ray 4/27/13 . chapter 5
Looking good. I only saw a few as a kid. I'm guessing that gihren killed his own dad. Wonder how gato would react to learning that his beloved emperor is a liar and murderer. Amuro should interact with gihren
Wonder what would happen
| spirit117 4/12/13 . chapter 5
Wow…just…wow, I think you just did the most deaths in a single chapter over any fanfic I ever read. The Zeons are in for a rude awakening next chapter and it’s sure to be a painful one. I really hope Sayla kicks Gato’s ass. As for Amuro they literally just woke up a sleeping monster. I can see it know “The White Comet of Jericho II” is born, or maybe the white demon.
Keep up the great work.
| Granten 4/11/13 . chapter 5
It sounds equal parts religious and political philosophy. Admittedly Sayla does have actual extrasensory perception (which gives the basic theory some credibility), but she still seems a bit of a fanatic angry that her sect was pushed down in favor of a different one. Exactly how many newtypes exist in both Zeon and Federation space?
Anyway, considering the 'all or nothing' extremes Zeon is going to have they considered the possibility of the Federation returning the favor on Zeon planets and colonies? .
Minor note, I don't see a real difference between the two possibilities Delaz considers about traitors.
Lastly, both Sayla and Fraw continue to be actually competent and useful. Would that the original had given them half these capabilities.
| Ben-01 4/3/13 . chapter 5
Thanks for the Answers,this story is my favorite.
NO One Deserve genocide!But it happed when Dictator,s have Absolute Power,with No Checks and Balances like the U.S have.
They demonize and dehumize any One who just diagree.
I Hope Sayla Kicks Geto,s Ass!
| gundamlover 4/2/13 . chapter 5
HOLY SH%T! TRULY AN AWESOME CHAPTER! BEWARE ZEON, THE TRUE STRENGTH OF THE LOWBORN WILL BE TERRIFYING!
| justbehappydammit 3/31/13 . chapter 5
Well, that was rather unexpected. The destruction of Jericho II, I mean.
| Juubi-K 3/31/13 . chapter 5
Another excellent chapter. Jericho getting destroyed was a shocker, but a meaningful one. I dread to think what this is doing to Amuro's sanity though. He had some good moments in this chapter, especially during the parade.
The Weltgericht was a nice touch. I find myself wondering, nitpick that I am, whether it was an actual converted colony, or a custom-built weapon.
| ZeroNu 3/31/13 . chapter 5
Was scared you were not working on this story anymore since it has been so long since the last chapter, but I am glad that you are still working on this one. This story pulls me right in and I cant wait to see what happens next for the Ark Royal and crew. Also I am looking forward to what the zeeks think about the Gundams. In the end I hope to see the next chapter soon and thanks for your hard working writing such a great story.
| Aegis Khaos 3/31/13 . chapter 5
All I can honestly think of here is 'kill Gato'. All the other stuff in this chapter could be trash (which it isn't), yet that's the only thing I wanted to see.
| SulliMike23 3/31/13 . chapter 5
Gato is just as deluded as the original. I hope Sayla makes him suck vacuum!
| justbehappydammit 3/6/13 . chapter 4
I like how when Amuro and Bright meet face-to-face, they come to very similar conclusions about each other.
| Ben-01 1/25/13 . chapter 4
Your story is One of the Best,It,s a Unique mix of canon and original and it,s Great!
I like to known Two things (1) What are the Nobility titles in the Zeon Empire?
(2)What is the Set-up of both Fleets?
| Gaby 1/10/13 . chapter 4
This is Great,the Next chapter will be Super!
I Hope you Update soon.
| Yuriski-1st 11/15/12 . chapter 3
I think I can be honest with you. I do not like people that style themselves as being better then the authors of the stories they write a fanfic about. It's very arrogant to take an already established universe and then, after changing a few things, proclaim that ones story is obviously much better then the original.
Yes, your story is interesting and your writing style very good. But just because you think MSG was not good at all, doesn't mean everyone will find your own story much better.
| Yuriski-1st 11/15/12 . chapter 2
"And yes, I know the line is "three times normal speed" for Char's Zaku, but I thought that was overpowering, and apparently Bandai did as well, as the line has been retconned to "30% faster". For once, I decided to follow Bandai's example."
Well, it was back to 3 times in Unicorn.
Anyway... a very awesome story you have here. I am rather interested how this will play out, if you say you don't like the storyline of the original.
But I have two questions:
First: Is Char even wearing a helmet here? I know it sounds silly to ask, but one can never be sure if it isn't mentioned.
Second: I always thought Newtypes can only sense each other, not everything going on around them. After all, no human mind (yes Newtypes are human) could function with all that information flowing in at all times.