Great story! Warren is a favorite of mine and you did every character justice, interesting read. Loved it :D

I liked your story. Showing us darker parts of Warren's soul.

I only have two questions:

1. You mentioned Ali and Betsy Braddock, but what about Husk? Angel already forgot about her?

2. I don't know why you put it into crossover section. The story belongs to X-Force because all the characters are the members of X-Force. Iceman doesn't count because he is only mentioned.

I like it - gritty, human, well-executed, and good character insight. Spot-on use of the internal voice/struggle Warren experiences. You should write Warren more often. Nicely done!