Very good job, one of the best I've read :D

Oh, chilling.

...I dont really get it, but it was very sweet! I liked it!

yay twincest *woot, woot* this is really deep ((somehow, it's twincest how did u pull it off? o_o)) 5/5

Wow... That was awesome! I'm loven the whole serious side to twincest bravo i never would had expected it. lol I love Hikaru and Kaoru SO MUCH love TWINCEST

FIVE trillion refresser points for FORBIDDEN BROTHERLY LOVE!

Not bad at all. A couple of run-on sentences in the beginning, but the IDEA of the story is perfect (and canon). It was really nice for a first Hitachiincest fic.

C ya!

Wow.

I like the detail you put into this. So descriptive! Your writing style is awesome. The story was short, but it really satisfies.

Great job!

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