i have no idea where this is going and i think you need to put more explaining in it

this is funny I hope you put up more chapters like this.

that was the most pointless but hilarious chapter ever. update soon!

luv

That made my eye's hurt.

Keep the story going. Be careful with the spacing, etc. The idiots that run/ruin this place ()

sometimes act in an arbitrary manner and erase stories and block the writers. Careful if you ever write again, you are missed.

great chapter, but the really big spaces are kinda annoying

i like smores too, just thought i'd let you know

JK, this story rocks!

interesting. i like this fic, ok, i've gotta keep reading now, bye

pLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY

Great story!

very good very funny very untestung any way keep going

YIPPEE! NEW CHAPTER!

WHERE'S THE REST OF IT! What a bunch of senseless nonsense! I loved it! Please, more! Do continue, considering the fact that I read this "extremely long" chapter in less than a few minutes, if even that. Please, let something happen!

Signed,

The ever gracious (yet easily angered) Talons, other half of Stripe&Talons, Inc.

love the story. you had better write more soon.

[psssst...it's Spirit/ JeSs. shh...this is my new secret pen name. because obviously whoever wanted to report me, is going to want to follow me. hehe. im so clever. anyway, im not doing , cuz im too dumb to figure it out :P well, ill see you later]

Malissa: *turns to sister*

Mortania: *SIghs* Well, I must say, for a moment it appeared as if it were us arguing...right Lissa?

Malissa: Yeah...*Looks at notebook* I seem to be seeing something..

Mortania: *Points* What? The word As?

LissA: Yes...the word as...I can feel a sentence there...

Mortania: *Grabs pencil and notebook* I think that I should do all the thinking...

MalissA: That may be a good Idea...but I will do the thanking...haha...well, Thank you for updating! ANd we must say, if Mortania can find a sentence then we shall be on our way!

Mortania: Thanks! Toodles!

The Riddle Daughters

Mortania & Malissa

can you update the fifth year mage? it is really good! i love it and its on my fave story list!