Lucius! Why, Lucius! Why can't you just accept the TRUTH!

good story, made me sad, though. Lucius should BELIEVE. But it's in character that he doesn't-atleast initially. So, who am I to complain?

Oh, and also-

"As let he Lucius continue his rant,"

should be

"As HE LET Lucius continue his rant,"

it's not much of anything-but I find it so hard to get any fault out of you so I jump while I can.

good story, madame.

-Hemlock27

Oh man, this is hilarious! Please, please, please tell me there's some sort of sequel to this!

BAVO! Well done. What a concept. Someone convinced that Bruce Wayne is delusional when he confesses to being Batman. And Lucius lists some good reasons why he does not believe. It is going to take some serious persuasion on the part of the Bat-Clan, too kep Bruce out of the local mental ward. I hope you write more on this. -Igor the Great-

Good story!

Definitely a way I'd expect Lucius to react to the Batman announcement.

LOL! Maybe this is how Bruce should protect his secret identity... tell the truth! This story is great, is there more? Please?

Wow, I loved this. The idea of Lucious finding out is really original. Please continue with this plot line, and thanks for sharing!