Love it. Cant air for the next story you put up. Was never a fan of oneshots but I live your ones!

aah! Amazing, but very tense.

This is a review for the last few chapters... I've wanted to keep on reading and not stop for a reveiw. WOW is this story tense, and amazing. The Ronan/Orla relationship is so cute! Did you say you made her up?

Better and better, I am hooked

Finally had the chance to finish. Adding Todd to the mix was brilliant. Thanks for this truly entertaining story.

About time Sheppard woke up! Sorry, but half the fun of the whumping is how he deals with and his snarking at the bad guys.

Okay...so not expecting it to be Wraith and worshipers! Great story, now I've got to get back to reading.

Aw! Ronon is such a sweatheart.

smashing but what about the beads?

Pleased everyone is safe but sad the storys over.

Rodney was great and I liked how you left it with the two friends at the end not much said or was needed to be said between those two.

Sequel?

d'wa! im a sucker for a fluffy ending! great job. hope the next one comes out just as good.

great story. Mckay was so Mckay in the last chapter. So when's the (whumpy) sequel?

I'm sad it's over but happy with the ending. That's a pretty good trade John made with Todd - one I think they will all be able to live with. I'd probably be mad for a while if I were Orla too. It's great to see the loving couple back together again safe and sound.

You did a good Job on a major Whump - I'm very impressed!

What ya working on now?

Excellent! I really enjoyed your story. Hope you'll write another one soon!

Thanks!

Mckay was awesome in this ending and I loved Sheppard and Ronon just kick-in it at the end.