Brilliant. Pure brilliance.

Very good! Weasley like indeed. :D

brilliant.

LOVEIT :D

Dude! This was so cool! I really laughed at seeing what you had done. BRAVO! One major typo about 7-8 lines down "Lies Ad" should be "lies aide" is what I think you mean... as in helps? I would fix this, only because it stops the reader and makes them have to figure it out. The rest of it is so smooth it would be a pity to see it messed up by one little typo.

I also wanted to invite you to a website I help run. It's the Pittsburgh Institute of Magical Arts. We run it as a role playing site based on Harry Potter but with your own original characters. It's a fun way of writing wtih other authors and we'd love to have you join us! The link is set as my homepage or you can private message me for it.

Thanks again for this fun piece!

Don't live a life controlled by others.

Oh that is So them.

I love it! they never seemed to be too worried about getting caught though In fact they seemed to revel in it.

Still this is perfect for them