i loved it.. you are a talented writer

! That was beautiful! I literally felt chills at some parts. Quite... sensational... I loved the references to the garden... and the whole Angel King concept in general was so original and so touching!
The flow of the structure could use a little brushing up and straightening out. On the whole, the piece was SO moving, but then there'd be a little line or phrase that didn't quite fit the flow and it took me out of it... SO I had to start building up the chills all over again ;)
But yes! Awesome! Phantom poems are hard to do without being cliche, and yours certainly wasn't! Thank you!

this is really cool-and i really, really like it. it just seems to fit right in with the lyrics of the broadway show, so it goes along with what you would expect him to say. awesome job!

Very nice poem. It does represent Erik well.

::breathtaken:: That was magnificent.

I have such a hard time writing poetry that rhymes, but this flows so smoothly. It's wonderful.

Wow...would you look at that. I'm reviewing. Watch me review.

OOOOOooooh the reviewing of the reviewness of the reviewnedge.

*takes deep breath*

So this was a pretty cool poem I liked it. .

I like the whole first little paragraph thingy.

It was my fave part.

Well gtg, lovelyness and praise.

*me*

Sniff sniff. This is good. You should submit this to a paper or something, get some money for it.