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Shishidoh Kagura 7/21/11 . chapter 1
Simply amazing job... I'm in love with this fic, yeah xD
ADHDKunoichi 6/30/11 . chapter 1
I'm the same way, the same as your uncle. i feel like i'm always being watched, and i see them behind me, but when i turn around nothing's there. i've got a few spirits that are "haunting" me now. there's a little girl, she's about nine or so, when I see her i can't help but think her name's Emily. then there's a boy that i think is her older brother. Christopher, I think that's what his name is.(Not to sound creepy, but he's watching me type this right now.) he's about thirteen. i'm pretty sure he's paranoid, because when he's not staring at me his eyes are darting around the room like he's expecting something to get him. wow, i'm gonna stop now cuz #1: this is getting to be really long and #2: Christopher left so that usually means that my sister's coming and I don't like her asking me questions about them, so bye!
45margi2 5/21/11 . chapter 1
Like your uncle..same thing happens to me. Which is why I always freak out about being left alone somewhere. I like this story a lot. I feel like it could 1 of 2 things. Either 1 he's feeling so guilty about what happened he starts seeing things and can't stop it. It's eating at him. Or 2 he really is seeing Gaara's spirit follow him around and he just doesn't know what to do. This story is so good.
xXxGaarasxXxLoverxXxKyraxXx 4/18/11 . chapter 1
I just...just don't know what to make of this story...you say not to over analyze this but how can one not specially with the way you ended it. *sighs* This story caught me completely off guard towards the end...I...I...*sighs* It's a great story and I faved it.
a minor error 1/18/11 . chapter 1
Holy Garra!But poor Naruto for having to live with that...
YeahYouWannaKnowMyName 10/21/10 . chapter 1
Wow, i See People That Others Can't See All The Time. I Never Think They Are Dead Though... Great, Give Me Kreepers, Why Don't You? But I Also Suppose That While I See Them they never Change. Not Age, At Least. The Bald Chick Seems To be Bipolar, But Thats Pretty Much it... I Also See A black Kitten, Mom Says its My Familiar. Crazy, huh? I Feel Like I Should Erase This And Put Up Something Like "Wow, You Really Got Me Thinking About This. It Was Great." But I Think I Should Tell You What It Made me Think. And It Made me Think, KREEPY! I'm Surrounded by Ghosts. I've Heard Ghosts Are Cold. I'm Always Freezing. I Like My Dr's POV better, Low Cerculation.

I'm Just Gonna Stop Now because That Is A Lot Of Random Babble.

YYWKMN.
NX-Loveless-XN 9/28/10 . chapter 1
I'm getting the feeling that this is about Gaara's death that agonizing Naruto... Mmmm. Sad story. I like it.
bostafu 9/22/10 . chapter 1
I really like it! I like how broken it is and it's just random scenes. I like how nobody really understand him or that nobody can actually REALLY believe him. Is it a ghost or in his mind? Well it doesn't really matter cuz either way it's haunting him. I just don't know the ending though... Hm.. does Naruto commit suicide? I mean a lot of time must've passed by if the number was 87.. Or is he still cooped up? I wonder who the person who last called was. and I don't quite get the last quote especially the "all the smiles that are ever ever... ever.." ever what? or do you mean like forever?

Well yea these questions you don't have to answer, I'm just expressing what I'm thinking about and the questions I'm asking myself.
My Solitude 5/22/10 . chapter 1
This is quite an interesting story, if a bit unsatisfying. The ending leaves much to be desired. I, too, see people from corners of my eyes, but only sometimes. Nowadays, I don't really see anymore (luckily).
Anonymous 5/2/10 . chapter 1
I love the story, it truly did piqué my interest the whole way through. And please, tell your Uncle that he's not just seeing things, that those "people" are just easier to see when your not looking. I'm not being sarcastic, they truly are. :)
jaybbycakes 3/19/10 . chapter 1
wow.. this is really amazing

you are a great writer. it kind of

made me sad, because of Naruto..

and Gaara.
tumblebee-mawmaw 3/16/10 . chapter 1
The people who have reviewed said it all...

It is utterly heart wrenching...

I love it.
gaaralover1989 3/16/10 . chapter 1
this story was so...heart wrenching...well to me anyway. To have such a tramatic memory buried and suddenly resurface in such a way.
Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare 2/28/10 . chapter 1
appropriate word to use, 'curious.' the new Alice in Wonderland is coming out, and i bought a new version of the original book and its sequel for te occasion, and as we all know, Alice is very curious. as was i, when i found this fanfic in my inbox. i always like reading your stories; i never know what's going to become of them, because you are very unpredictable, but i know that can always rely on the characters/pairing you choose.

and this... well. for the occasion, i played - and still have playing - 'The Ghost of You' by MCR on my iTunes while i read, and now while i review. perfect inspiration, songs are; and it's very... /curious/... that you chose this one, and made this oneshot. because this oneshot is... brilliant bizarre.

really it is. i love the choppy flow, like snapshots taken by an old print-out camera. i also like the eerie feeling of it combined with the music i have playing - it reminds me of Shutter Island. have you seen that yet? i love that movie. in the movie, each piece of the puzzle came slowly falling into place; just like how you wrote this story. and yet in both Shutter Island and this oneshot, the ending is not etched into stone, and leaves the viewer/reader up to his/her own devices to formulate their own speculations as so what happens next, and why, and how, and so on.

so, all in all, i nce again love and admire your work, and am left to ponder what it is i read. i daresay i'll be coming back to this for re-reading and more puzzling, but not over-analyzing. just... refreshing. because, you know, every time you read or watch something for the umpteenth time, something new - idea or piece of the story - pops up and becomes clearer.

-"you catch something different each time," as my mom would say.

Dreaming-chan
StarFixation 2/28/10 . chapter 1
Well this was cool. Not creepy what soe ever. i mean it is a ghost story of sorts.
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