Wow. Nice use of the ship's log concept. The first person perspective really helps convey emotion. I actually was planning on writing a fic about how the Ragnarok got lost in space, but I don't think I could do it better. I'm adding this to my favorites.

Sheer perfection. It sent shivers down my spine.

O_o How do you get something so CREEPY out of such an obscure idea? This is awesome. It's nightmarish. In a good way.

I suppose I should have known that there was no possible way this story could have had a happy ending, but I found myself hoping otherwise. Um, sort of? Of course, people "in the know" (like

myself) know better.

I liked the little bit about dorpping off Sorceress Adel; maybe some more about that would have been nice, but it's not a big deal.

And President Laguna ALWAYS has the right ideas.

...wow...this fic was really really good. I mean...it must of took some kind of imagination to think all that up. *sighs* It's so beautiful!

I really liked how you put the emotion into the documenation bits. Like how the dude (Officer Shelling his his name I think) was really scared and stuff...At one point, I was scared! *sighs* Poor dude...he was wrong..and he...he...*gasps*...yeah...I'm sure you know as well as I do what happens...

Great job on this...really.

This is not normally the type of story I read, I like romance hehe. But since it was you, I thought I would read it! And I must admit I was pleasantly surprised. This is great! Nearer the end it got quite exciting! It's really interesting to see the way that they discovered the colour etc. and then of course they record it so that Squall and Rinoa can kill them/ Brillant idea for a story! I liked the end bit, true Estherian! This was very well-written as always, and was enjoyable and makes me want to play the game again hehe! Another great job (I didn't expect anything less)!
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Oo *shivers* fantastic. guess i'm reviewing all your stuff today, huh? )

i've never seen a fic written as a log, very interesting. you take all the plot holes and things we wonder about and make them your own, and you deserve credit for that.

::chuckle:: He was arrogant before, and there was a slughter. He was arroant after, and I think we all know what happens next...very good!

Very well done! The tension and suspense are flawless, I was actually holding my breath while reading it. The almost casual, hopeful way he writes that last entry gives the diary such an ominous feel - how horribly wrong he is. An excellent work.

The only problem I can think of is the Ragnarok probably isn't 100 meters long. It didn't seem that big to me...but that's just a little detail. Good job an a superb story!

I got chills at the end. I'm glad you didn't have him write WHILE he was dying or something like that. I've seen other authors have a character writing in a journal, and this character is supposed to be hiding or dying or fighting or something, and they're writing in their journal at the same time! That's impossible. Yours ended with his hope. And obviously, he never did make it home to his Liza, I wonder where those other 2 Propagators were! Hiding? I never looked up what the words propatagor and ragnarok meant b4. This also makes me wonder how Squall and Rinoa were able to kill all 8, when a whole crew couldn't figure out how to get them down! Those were hard though! It seemed the only thing that worked was a silence spell or Siren. And if you lose those or Siren dies and you don't have a GF returner, you're basically screwed 'cuz there is nowhere for you to go to get more magic or anything!

One thing...Ragnarok and its two other ships were launched from the Sorceress Memorial. Look at the overview map 'icon' that represents the Memorial, and you'll see the launch structure in the back that the FMV sequence that has the Ragnarok ships launch is.

Really creative and original piece. Writing it as a ship's log is very effective, as it gives an air of reality to the events. Great idea and skillfully written, one to stand out from the crowd.

Ah, but he was so wrong!

I really enjoyed this story. I love fics that fill in gaps in the game's story. Keep up the good work.

oh i like this! bout time someone dared to be different and take things from the game that wasnt really explained and gave it a background. bavo. you go - keep up the great work