aw so sad..

Once again, I can't help but be impressed by your in-depth look at Squall and Rinoa. It's almost as if you yourself created these characters and you're looking into their souls.. (sorry if that sounded cheesy) It just amazes me how you come up with these little back stories pertaining to the game and it somehow works perfectly. Once again, love this and your work.

Hiya! Really cute story and nice take on the 'after the concert' deal.
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This story wasn't as good as the other ones I've read so far, but it still kept my attention and I was still thoroughly interested. Keep up the good work! You're number one fan right here!

This story was a sweet little thing, you got both Squall and Rinoa's characters perfectly! I like this story, it's not very long or anything but it has a attraction!

Love

Rache x

Ha, I'm back (I'm in the mood to review today as you can obviously see) I like it when you're in Squall's head, it makes him seem that little bit more understandable, where as others just write 'whatever' and think they've got him down to a 'T'. The convo between Squall and Rinoa is very captivating and I like it when you say at the end about how she feels he hasn't even left. Well done.

hmm...real good job here. squall is a philisophical person, it comes out during certain points of the game, when he thinks to himself. He has alot of deep stuff to say, introverted people usually have alot going on up there. but i could really see him feeling that way, that we are the masters of our own destiny. he's too cut and dried to be spiritual, IMO.

Reading this was like silk. It captures eloquently the way falling in love is. Not at all fairytale and sudden, but rather enigmatic and lingering. Tres bien. :)

An interesting look into everyone's perspective. I find it a *bit* OOC that Squall would be so candid at this point in the game, but it makes for a nice scene. The end is an nonclassical one-I like it.

You know, oddly enough I've just begun to work on something that explores that odd little side of things that you've looked at here. It's a lesson in irony, really-Squall believes that he's the only force controlling his life... but I'm the author, aren't I?

One small request to make, though-you have such a wonderful style, and it shows so much talent and conviction... might you take a look at some of my works? I would appriciate any advice you might have for a lowly author such as myself...

Another beautiful, skillfully painted piece. I really admire your rich & easy-flowing style.

I know I've read this somewhere before, probably at another site a long time ago. I love your side scenes that happened during the time of the game, but you elaborate on them, and they still fit into the story.