wow, what an amazing fic! great job!

whoa. wait, did squall gamble seifer's life with russian roulette, or did he calculate it and make sure he shot the empty one? well anyways, it makes him look really cool...

Pretty cool. I can't really offer much adivce, obviously, AGAIN, because there wasn't really anything wrong. There we are.

L. Loire-"Ooh! The tip o' my nose ITCHES!"

cool...that was awesome...the fight scenes were really done well and the characters, as always, were done in character...

But I don't get it. Maybe it's just my small brain...but...what's so special about Squall showing 5 bullets when there's only 6 to a barrel? Eh...it's probably just me.

Damn, great fic.

Wow! I was kind of iffy about reading this-wasn't sure the plotline would be all that good-but it is (as usual to you), wonderful. _ Why can't all writers on characterize like you do? ::pouts::

WHOA! *Speechless* HOLY S***! THIS. IS. WONDERFUL! How do you DO that? I only wrote three fics, but out of ALL the ones I reviewed and read, yours HAS to be the absolute BEST. You win the award for best Squall actor! OMG! I think I read this a looooong time ago because I remember the bullet trick. Squall won out of cleverness, but Seifer won out of strenght. "The bigger they are, the harder they fall." You are going on my favorites list!

-Me

Oooh, I really like this! Great action and dialougue(sp?). Keep writing. Add more to this if you can think of anything.

“I may not be able to think ‘outside’ The Box,” the end of Squall’s weapon edged closer to Seifer’s face. His voice became very quiet. “But I’m a hell of a lot better than you are at working with what’s in it.”

hell yeah...go squall! love the tension between them and the pre-game setting. Your one-liners are great and you do justice to these characters. Woo...i'm envious. awesome work.

Write more!

That was really intense, and explains a lot about their ennemity. It is amazing how well you manage to follow the game's script, while enriching it. Good work.

Hey, it humored me...anyway, that was great. I'm gobbling up every fic you have...you better hurry with cranking out the new stuff!

Very well written, but why humor genre?