i wuved it so much

semefai hot

they were IC though kuro could use some more blushing

this is exactly how their roles should be i hate those fics with a defenceless girly fai which is so ooc

well i loved the fic

Oh, Kuro-chan, you fool. Can you not see what Fai obviously has in mind for you?

Loved this story! I think it really captures the complexity of their relationship. Btw, I definitely think that an inexperienced Kuro-wanwan is very IC. Also the pace is parfait! I would say that kuro's dialogue could use more... Kuro-ness. I feel as if he should be stumbling over his words more and potentially more blushing. But overall I loved it!

*fangirls, dies, and favortes*

More?

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Aww, it ended so cutely! And gosh, for a story you didn't much care for, I must say, I loved it! Always love a good Fai-seme, keeps things interesting. One thing I did notice... your use of hyphens. There are A LOT of them. Don't let Comma feel unwanted and unappreciated - use him! (hahaha)

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P.S. I also dislike the fact that very few people seem to be commenting on stories. It is really quite disheartening when you see a ton of views, but only a few comments, even if the comments all say, "I LOVE IT!" Personally, I comment every story I read, but that's just my policy. Anyway, nice work! I may read another in a moment!

X3 I thought this was extremely cute. I dub it cute erotica. I loved the naive Kuro most. _

May I thank you for taking a new approach to lemons? I think this is great because you didn't go for something totally plotless and meaningless. This - this is good stuff here.

I agree via the reviews thing! Reading and then not leaving any kind of comment... it's just mean.

Your fic was awesome. You brought out some great imagery. I like the slow sexiness. Too many fics show them in a frenzy, rushing like the other is going to disappear. I like seeing them take their time and I especially love seeing an in control Fai and a nervous Kuro-poo. Well done. Some errors but very well written.

D'aw I love it! 3

The sex scene was really nice -I love how you wrote. Very slow and sensual, warm and comforting as Kurogane said. It was really beautiful. 3

R they in love or just a 1 time thing?

Very cute :D

Aw this was really sweet: )

Oh Fai, you sneaky little fellow!

I really love how you made this sweetly intimate, and not just quick steamy smex.

Keep up the great work!:D