| Reviews for Take the Ice |
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TwiTwiAgain 12/20/12 . chapter 9Ugh! I was waiting for the other shoe to fall. Renee is here. I knew it was inevitable, unless she fell in love with Phil and chilled out. |
InkedBaby 12/15/12 . chapter 26Okay, so I definitely fell in love with this story. Seriously. This was amazing. This is probably one of the only stories on this site that can stand as its own book. You are an amazing writer. I was roped in from the very beginning and was glued to my iPod, constantly reading til I finished it. You storyline was perfect, and it was so far frOm all the cliche nonsense I read now a days. I love each and every one of your characters, and it was amazing how distinctly themselves they were. Each character stood out and none of their personalities ever blended into each other. Let me just tell you their relationship is perfect in this. From each individual couple to them on a whole, it was perfect. This is easily one of my top three stories ive ever read, and I just can't stop thinking about. Nice job, and thanks for sharing.(: |
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT 12/11/12 . chapter 8Awww, Big sigh! Best date and moments together ever! Im completely envious of their cute little relationship! And thats probably because i dont have one.. But thats neither here nor there. So amazing chapter! You know I love it all! -A |
Colleen K 12/9/12 . chapter 12 Gosh those chapters with Renee were tough to get through. I gotta say though that I hope that Bella does more then just tell her off. While reading those chapters I was hoping that a piano would fall on Renee or she'd get hit by bus. Haha! I just wanted to say I love this fanfic. You are a fantastic writer. -C |
AGRIMLIKEDOG 12/10/12 . chapter 1Rereading this story because i need hockey in my life |
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT 12/9/12 . chapter 7Gosh that really was a big one! But I definitely enjoyed it! Its weird to think that now they are going to be dating now and wont just be "friends" If I'm being honest I'm a little nervous and really excited all at the same time! I cant wait to see what happens with these to adorable ones! Another incredible chapter. CHapter 8 is now officially calling my name! -A |
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT 12/9/12 . chapter 6So how adorable is it that he now has a picture for his phone ID? Very. I'm awing so bad over here! And i just cannot stop giggling from the fact that they wore the same thing! Also, would like to squeal and giggle at how cute and adorable they are on the ice together... like seriously! I loved this one too, and I just can't ever decide a favorite chapter I love them all that much! So great great chapter! Im definitely checking out those videos soon. Funny because I was in the Verizon store today and there was figure skating on one of the tvs and I couldnt help but be drawn to it. I find that very funny! So enough of my mindless chatter. More reading! -A |
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT 12/9/12 . chapter 5AHHHH, you totally fooled me with the first kissing! And then they actually kissed. Soo happy, even if she practically rejected him. But its fine, its only chapter five and you just promised he'd be in the next one! ;) So amazing chapter! I'm quickly off to more of these lovelies! -A |
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT 12/9/12 . chapter 4First, I love Esme. Its so endearing to read this part of the story because I feel like at this point in my life, the same thing Bella is gong through is happening to me. And its just heart warming to see that I can be influenced by something so small. SO thank you for that. Second, she finally fucking realized the connection! And i cannot wipe the goofy smile off my face, thanks for that! ;) Third, I smacked my forehead for Bella, the whole crush thing ya know, but still huge smile on my face! And last, it was freaking every thing i was hoping for and more! I'm so in love with this dang story and these characters! I cant wait till she gets on the ice with Edward next chapter, cause ya know thats whats gonna happen! Ahhhhh, so yeah I'm gonna hop on over the next chapter cause i jus cant wait. Just Amazing! -A |
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT 12/9/12 . chapter 3Awee man, I completely forgot about Carlisle! He was so precious! And I totally thought she would go with the girls, because that would have meant Edward... Damn Renee! I've loved it all and I'm so sure I will love the rest. Off to more because I just cant refuse myself! -A |
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT 12/9/12 . chapter 2I have a feeling this story will consume my life for the next couple of weeks. Its already started and I'm soooo excited to read more. I cant wait till Edward comes into the picture! Ahh I can only imagine. Anyways, off to go read more of this wonderful story! - A |
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT 12/8/12 . chapter 1Well Im finally reading this, And I'm rather really excited. Anyways, great start to this story I can only imagine what can happen! These two are adorable and I really hope she goes to try to meet him! -Ashley |
Guest 12/5/12 . chapter 26 WOW! I just started reading your story and was hypnotized, and I became speachless at how wonderful it is, WOW! I fell in love with these two. I just couldn't stop reading and wanting more of them. Everything Bella went through was so sad but she was able to come out of it as a shinning bright star. I love that she was able to win the gold medal at the olympics, AWESOME! I love how patient and caring but yet so masculine and protective Edward was with her. I especially loved the way you made their relationship just blend as one, the ying and the yang, neither able to survive without the other, but together they become a force to be reckoned with. I love this story and I wish you would have made a sequal or added more outtakes. After spending a whole day reading this amazing story hidden away from family and friends, I feel a loss because it has ended. I loved the ending, Edwards pov was just so heartfelt. Your an AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT Writter and I hope you continue to write. Thank you for sharing this story with us and giving us the opportunity to read it. IT's officially my absolute favorite story and I will be rereading it over and over. Thank you! YOU ROCK! Narcy ;-) |
sannros 11/30/12 . chapter 26i really love this story, thanx for writing it :D |
PJHPSGfan 11/27/12 . chapter 26I normally don't review too often, but I am completely obsessed with your story. I spent two days straight reading it and am completely on love with it. You did such an amazing job! I'd love for you to do different scenes in different points of view, but they're too many I want in Edwards, so my best suggestion is just do the whole thing in Edward'd POV. If not... Well my top three picks for seperate scenes in his POV are when Bella skates to the lullaby and he asks her to marry him, when Renee talks to Edward when Bella's not in the room and he looks like he wants to break her neck, and when Bella tells him she loves him for the first time. Thanks! |