hmmmmmmmmmmm. Oh, yah! Now I remember, I was supposed to review?(Liger growls) Okay. Well, i'm writing an original zoids fic about the Raptare 7. I start it off my beating up Brads Shadow Fox for a dollar, joining the Blitz team, and trying to pull Doc away from Raptare. THE ZOID NEEDS IT"S OWN PRIVATE TIME FOR GOD'S HOLY SAKE!

That was interesting. . By the way, I thought Bit and his sister were twins? You changed her age and Jamie's. . Just wondering if that was an accident or you got something else in mind now. Till your next chapter, ttfn!

nice. you write very well. ;) keep it up.

Good story! Please keep going!

pretty good so far! awwwwwww, how cute! jaimies in love!

Jemie... its spelled Jemie... not Jaime, not Jamie... JEMIE! Sry, I've been readin Zoids fics and so far not one person spelled it right. Uhm, okay. You've really got potential, but you need to work on doing research. Jemie is 14, Bit, Leena, and Kaguya are 16, Brad 17, and I dunno the rest. Aside from that, work on characteristicsism... is that a word? Uhm, just, my dear Jemie isn't shy enough and Leena isn't rude enough, and Bit the It isn't enthusiastic enough. Not a flame, just trying to help. Good story, very descriptive, and I want that SkyBolt! . Hope to read more soon. But I have one complaint... JEMIE IS MINE!

Sorry I didn't review sooner I've been off line for a while anyways THIS CHAPTER WAS GREAT! They are so good for each other.

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Write more soon!

Karigan

Great but write more soo.

Can you guess what I'm gonna say?...That's right: Cliff-Hangar! Major frustration! Argh! You must also know what this means, then, correct?

:::Gr-Rowl::

That's right, Liger. Write again soon! Even longer and better and faster and-and-and, Oh, just write! yay!

Later!

Phoenix (No more torpedos! I'll get you back for that, Leena!) of the Cold Fire (Brrrr...*(8-O...)

Awh, I luved that chapter! I'll be hoping for more soon!

::RoWl::

He says he can't wait to see Angel and the Raynos in battle with their upgrades! Write again soon, and by soon I mean _soon_!

Man the torpedos, full speed ahead!

Later!

Phoenix (Keep it up!) of the Cold Fire (Brrrr...*(8-O...)

oh that was soooooo good! I am now a devoted fan of this story and it is defently going on my favorites list! Jamie and Kaguya make such a great couple and I just love this story so much!

Karigan

oooh this is sooooooo good! Does Kaguya like Jamie? If she does then that's a really good pairing I think. Oh just a suggestion you could try to add a bit more detail. Put the next chapter up soon and I'll consider adding this to my favorites list

Karigan

Oooooooohhhhh...PLease Update! I really like the story..Of course B/L is gonna be in here? Right? Please tell me it will be in here!

Excelent start. I'd like to know more about Bit's

sister and her background. What does her Zoid look like? And is it me, or are Jamie and Kaguya

attracted to each other? A battle with Bit and

Kaguya vs. say... Leon and Naomi or the Backdraft

group would be interesting. I can't wait for the next installment of this. Remember that the quality of a story is more important than the quanity of chapters in it.

I like, I really do! I know how hard first fanfics are to write...My one is my only, so far. I think you've started off on a good note, establishing people, times, and places. Out of curiosity, how old _is_ Jamie in your ficcy?

::RuaR::

Yes, you've got the right of it, Liger. Keep up the good work, and never give up hope! Till the cows fly and the wolves walk backwards...

Man the torpedos, full speed ahead!

Later!

Phoenix (Luv the fic so far!) of the Cold Fire (Brrrr...*(8-O...)