cute ending _

This was sweet and funny. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for the great read. Keep writing.

LOL This is hilarious. You have Randal to a tee! It's amazing!

'Randal wears his ring on a chain and keeps it hidden under his shirt.'-I thought that was really cute and sweet.

But truly, you have harnessed the essence of these characters in a very short piece ]

Totally scattered, extremely short, but everyone was in character and Randal (as always) made me laugh.

You write dialogue very well.

Love it.

:)

So glad to have found this fic! I really loved the concept of it. It was short and simple and really nicely written. I could see this happening in the movie. The whole bit with Elias was a nice touch. Amazing work! :)