OH MY...AGH! THIS IS PERFECT, WHY ISN'T THIS BEING UPDATED; MY ABILITY TO READ FANFICTION THAT DOESN'T AT LEAST GO TO YOUR LEVEL HAS BEEN DESTROYED, WHY ME? I SMELL SLASH IN THE NEAR FUTURE, AND THE ANGST! OH GOD THE ANGST!

*sobs uncontrollably*

*peeks up, sits up, stops crying, and straightens out hair*

To put into politer terms what my wretched inner fangirl is TRYING to say *throws knife at inner fangirl, who says "OW!"*, I love your work, am quite sad that you haven't updated in what is coming to almost a year, and wish that you would, so that I and many others might relish in the glory of your writing. Also, I am going to have to save up money to buy your two books, for if your writing on this website is ANYTHING like your writing in your books (which I have no doubt it is), they are definitely worth the money.

Sincerely,

Wagnerlover7 7 7

P.S. I feel guilty for not offering constructive criticism, so therefore: Some of the actual descriptions, though admittedly limited to first-person and can be excused a lot, seem even then a little lacking for descriptions of backgrounds and scenery wherein the actual interactions take place. Though most people focus more on other people than their surroundings, I'm sure that anyone would think about their environs a little more than Roxas seems to be doing. All that I'm getting right now is stuff like 'in the cafeteria', or 'talking to Namine'.

I LOVE YOU.

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This is so great. Really it is. And just...

Oh man.

It's great seeing those two cousins outside of the book. And I'm also really excited about the inclusion of the Org. XIII members. Did you know you'd be writing a sequel? Because all the Org. members were left out of Dance with Me (which is unusual in fanfics because htey're s popular) so did you know you were saving them for the sequel?

Anyways, this story is off to a great start and I'm so excited for the rest. Please keep it up! It's great reading new things from you.

*bliss*

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SCREW IT

I CAN'T WRITE A COHERENT REVIEW RIGHT NW

I HAVE TO READ THE REST

GODDAMNIT YOU WILL HEAR FROM ME LATER MADAME

BECAUSE THIS IS ALL TOO WONDERFUL TO BE PAUSED

*bliss*

AND NOW THE MAIN FREAKING CHARACTER IS HER WITH VINDEFLEI WHO I LOVE SO MUCH?

-explodes-

I am actually making noises. I am sitting in my dorm making noises. YOU ARE GIVING ME FEELINGS.

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I'm actually squeaking. Holy shit.

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I would leave a longer review but quite frankly I'm too excited to read more also RIKU LEARNED THE LANGUAGE YAY

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*bliss*

-screams inchoerently for several prolonged minutes of time-

OHMYGODTHERE'SASEQUEL.

Seriously.

OHMYGOD.

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Btw, this is ChibiFrubaGirl. I just recently got a new account so I could get active on the site again.

AND YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I WAS TO FIND THIS. ARRALKSGDJALKSDJG.

So I read Amazing Grace (I think I told you that like WAY BEFORE LIKE YEARS BEFORE OHMYGOSH IT'S BEEN SOLONG), and I'm really happy Max is more included in this story 'cause I really like him and HOLYSHITIAMSOHAPPYRIGHTNOW.

You're making me giggle. Seriously, I am in college now and you have turned me into the squibbling junior high/high schooler that giggled and cried over your first story and now you're doing it again except I'm older so HATS OFF TO YOU FOR APPARENTLY INVENTING A TIME MACHINE.

Honestly though... I still go back and reread Dance With Me maybe twice a year or so and finding this sequel has made my day. I'm so happy. Like filled with emotions and satisfaction and contentness happy. And a little bit of tears. You've got me really nostalgic nw. And I just might cry if you make this any more emotional for me. Seriously.

The fact that I will see more of these characters who mean so much to me is a great gift. Thank you. You're fantastic. Truly truly.

Keep it up

*bliss*

Ahh, I really hope you continue thiss!

Also, I noticed/remembered that you're going to be using one of my suggestions and you spelled her name wrong - it's supposed to be Lanamax :D

Ahh, i'm seriously looking forward to this and Kompresssiioonn xD

So I'm now reviewing this story, and, after reading your books, I really want to see more Roxas-Soli interaction! And I love that Roxas gave them both nicknames _ So I hope that your inspiration comes back and that you get some new ideas!

BAHAHAHA! Sora and Roxas crack me up! I laughed so much in this chapter. I expected Sora to be spying somewhere (like from a garden ;P) and corner Roxas about the hug.

You know, it's really amusing how much Roxas is turning out like me. Geez! I though I was a bit mre unique than the average nerd! I can even relate to the unwillingness to help. I don't really want to sometimes, but I just do it anyway.

"I know that once you fall in love, it's hard to fall back out." - So true.

Aw [ I wonder what set Soli off... The Namine part was cute ] I can definentally see a good friendship budding there, but now I'm curious who she likes, hah D I can't wait to read more! Much love, dearie.

I can so imagine Sora doing something like that too! I just love Roxas' relationship with his brother; it's very amusing. It's also during his talk with namine where I start to see how the summary fits in XD

I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this story. I did a little happy dance when I saw an update for it! Hopefully you're inspiration is starting to return?

You know I actually DID notice you changed the summary (just look at these new observation skills I’m learning from Sherlock!)! Shocking, I know. And you’re right—it’s far too early in the story for anyone to notice any plot changes. So you do your thing. XD

I’ve missed this universe. D; I was so happy to see an update! And goodness, grumpy Roxas playing cupid…oh dear. Lol. But SWIL sounds AWESOME. You know any fic with a Sci Fi club in it is going to do amazing things. Bonus points for all the Star Trek talk. :D

I understand the lack of inspiration, and wish you luck on trying to push past it as I'm struggling with the same!

AHHHHH I was sooooo happy to receive an update for this story! I'm glad you decided to give it another go! And I did notice the change in the summary which threw me off and I thought I was seeing things till you mentioned it hehehe

Seriously though you have no idea how much this chapter made my day! I'm really enjoying it and I am seriously so looking forward to what you have planned. That scene with Saix and then at the end with the email had me rolling XD All I can say is Poor Roxas and laugh at the same time cause its just great!

I like the name SWIL so no objections for me! ITA about the last names too

(btw i'm getting the strongest urge to go back and re-read Dance With Me)

Aw, haha, I'm so happy now 3 another amazing chapter! Just what I needed to cheer me up from being sick ] I can't wait to read more!

I'm glad to see an update! SWIL sounds exciting, haha, and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Hee hee, I'm glad to see that Suki-Toki's made it onto the list!

And the bit about "Sweetness" and "Light" and their commentary was fun. I'm excited about what you're planning to do with this, and the new summary sounds like fun! Happy writing! :)

Ah, this was pure awesome! I just read through the entirety of "Dance with Me" and what you have of this.. I was so upset to find it unfinished. XD

Oh well, more reviews for you. :P Are you still in need of OCs? I'm pretty loud and weird if I do say so myself, but I couldn't find the link on your pageeee D:

Maybe that was just stupidity on my behalf. v_v

Anywhoosers, I'm absolutely loving this so far; you definitely have a lot of talent when it comes to writing. Can't wait for more!