Cute! I loved it!

This is so damn sweet. I loved reading every word of it. Your ending to this is really satisfying and umm... Great set-up by Zell *high fives Zell* You deserve more reviews as this fic is pretty amazing though I wonder why there is no mention of Eden.

Your character development for Squall and Rinoa is pretty accurate and I liked how you made Squall open up towards the end. Well done!

Cheers

Keep Writing

So it's a million years after you actually posted this, and I just wanted to remind you what an awesome job you did on it. Seriously. Adorable, good characterization, well-written. Love it.

gee, i don't know what to say to a fic like this which actually really SCARILY captures squall's character downpat in very very intricate perfect details just like how he is in the game. it's freaky, and well, you did it, and that's a compliment in way! and you're awesome, and part of me wants to glomp you for making zelly a sweetheart for making that prank in here. i love him to bits, that hotdog lover that he is, and even that brief segment where he was featured is enough for a zell fangirl like me. ever considered doing just one zell fic (it's just me, since i'm zell-crazy), since you're able to capture his personality full well as well?

in other words, keep going at these erm, awesome( excuse the overexcessive usage of 'awesome' in here) fics going...

Very cute, I liked Zell's prank! At least it gave our beloved characters some alone time to sort out their feelings, hehe. Good job again, love that fluff and natural talent you have.

That was sweet )

-Moshi Moshi Mai

Hullo there...

I stopped by to take some news! Wanted to know if you were gona udpate on of your stories soon, or if you had intention in writting some new pieces? Also, If there some other site where you post your fics? Story that you maybe haven't posted here?

Voilà voilà! And well, I also wanted to thank you for all the great time I had reading each of your pieces...lol.

THANK YOU!

*sniff* So cute... Gotta love squinoa. *sniff* Nicely done.

*sighs* Aw...that's so cute...*sniffles...You know, you're a really good Squinoa writer. You make it seem in character when Squall reveals his feelings to Rinoa. *smiles* great job...I'm starting to become a REALLY big fan of yours!

Hey...I had read it SO MANY TIMES but had forgot to review it...Aw,man...This IS definitively the BEST fic I ever read!It's so cute,and aw!And I just LOVED the first watch too!Keep writing,you are the BEST!:D

This piece still remains a classic among the 'in game' stories. I love your characterization, and how the players interact within their setting. I especially enjoy the emotional magnitude of Zell’s ‘little’ joke. Hope all is well. :)

HI,me again, your biggest fan! This is a truly amazing story and I printed out like 5 copies of it and taped it to my wall! I was saying aw so much in this story that i'm all awed out! Squall letting Rinoa SLEEP with him! All I can say is WOW!

Cute. Very cute. Way to keep all the characters mostly in character. )

aw! I thought that was so sweet when Rinoa told Squall she loved him and in a way sweet how he replied. What a lovely story!

How many of your stories have I read today? Gee I think I spend my whole day reading your stories! I haven't even done my situps for today yet! That is my own personal very VERY serious sin! But for my sin I get punishment which is I have to do all the situps I have missed in one sitting and that would add up to 900! AH! I am saying this stuff to show you how much I enjoy your writing! he he he!

I must be quite a scary reviewer ya know? oh well mwhahaha! But I really love this story!

I don't think I will be able to read any more of your stories today my jaw has had it! It will probally go on strike soon if I continue to use it so much!

Oh well! Good Night!

Rachel

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This is a very cute story. I love how Squall opens up to Rinoa at the end.

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