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| Elena 2006-08-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is a really good story. You're a very good writer in general, and i'm surprised that you didn't get more reviews. Well, i guess abundance in reviews doesn't necessarily prove the story's caliber (there're so many dumb Kenshin fics out there with bunch of reviews). Since this story hasn't been updated in four years, i think it's safe to assume that it's abandoned...at least it didn't end on a cliffhanger. I really enjoyed reading this story. I especially like the mood of Kenshin's character. He's still lost from the Bakumatsu, however we do witness hints of future recovery. Well done. |
| ruruken15 2006-06-17 ch 7,  | abuseI like this! its when we see the Kenshin we all know and love emerge...even if its a fanfic, i have a habit of replacing these with what really happened, and since i have abosultly little about kenshins life before he met Kaoru, this is what happened! Anyway, I hpe you can update soon! |
| moeru himura 2005-03-27 ch 7, | abuseso this is unfinished, huh? i thought the "ending" was abrupt but it was fine for an ending. only a lot of things unexplained. So right now I'm happy that its not yet done... but will you ever update this? Pls. don't neglect this...:p |
| skenshingumi 2005-03-05 ch 7, | abuseGreat stuff. I realize this story has not been updated in three years, but I would love to hear what Kenshin and Hashidiya discuss when they get back to the temple. How does Kenshin get out of Aizu? Just a constructive point, I believe it was chapter 4 that had quite a few spelling errors. I hope you are still writing!! |
| skenshingumi 2005-03-05 ch 6, | abuseFirst of all, action-packed and exciting chapter. I love the monk character and how he has obviously fought an inner struggle similar to Kenshin's. And NInjas...always good to have ninjas. |
| skenshingumi 2005-03-04 ch 4, | abuseOnly his second year, and Kernshin has spent it getting and recovering from serious injuries. How could they kick him in the stomach, and just when he was finally starting to heal emotionally too. Good story. |
| skenshingumi 2005-03-04 ch 3, | abuseI love the imagery of Saito Gatotsu'ing the laundry. That would be a great fanart. |
| skenshingumi 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseQuite an opener but passed on your past stories, I am happy to go along for the ride. |
| WolfDaughter 2005-02-23 ch 7, | abuseNo! You really can't do this to your readers, you know. It's not fair. ::pouts:: Must..Have..Ending... ::grins:: Seriously though. This is a wonderful story and I'd love to see it finished, even though it's been so long since you worked on it. |
| BakaBokken 2005-01-24 ch 7, | abuseWah! And you left it here! T_T I just discovered this story today, and I sat here glued to the computer screen reading it for the last... oh... hour maybe. XD Great work! I hope you continue this one day, but if you choose not to, well... I guess we'll just have to live with it, ne? Anyway, great story! I really enjoyed it a lot! Jaa! ~Baka |
| Shimizu Hitomi 2003-06-09 ch 7, | abuseit might have been interesting to see more of the monk's struggle. Kenshin's inner battle was written very well. time for the next chapter ^_^ |
| Shimizu Hitomi 2003-06-09 ch 6, | abusee, scaree people. so haishidiya knew? I think it's interesting that he is also a former samurai. |
| Shimizu Hitomi 2003-06-09 ch 5, | abuseah, poor kenshin. his mind is getting so screwed. what'd he do to his attackers?? |
| Shimizu Hitomi 2003-06-09 ch 4, | abuseuh-oh... now i gotta hurry to read the next chapter, or else I will be extremely concerned... |
| Shimizu Hitomi 2003-06-09 ch 3, | abuselol... I love your explanation of how kenshin got into the "oro" thing... ^_^ |