I think I'm abput to explode, because of how the cuteness and the fun of this filled me. I love-love-looove it : love the idea, love the girl (I would SO react like that if I saw them making out), love how you write (aaah, Jack's "I want sex" expression ; priceless), and it was incredibly fun, but also quite hot in the beginning!

Whoop, favorite.

Omg XD lol That would totally be me! XD Love it!
Micky. x

This is probably the cutest thing I've ever read! I love Charlotte, such a wonderful character, even though we didn't see a lot of her. Maybe she'll show up again? *wink wink nudge nudge* Ianto's reactions are so perfect too!

-Nyx

Haha! The very best self-insertion I've ever come across!

ge... love that read... would like to have a copy of that picture, too ;o)

Ahaha - loved it. And I can so totally relate to Charlotte. :P I mean... can't we all, aye.

Thanks for the great little read - very enjoyable!

Kar, xx

that was epic :D loved it! i can imagine myself doing what that girl did XD

x

Now why do I get the feeling that the one new word that young girl is going to learn from Jack will also be the last one she remembers... RETCON, anyone? ;D

Aw that was so cute! I loved the bit with the schoolgirl and the camera lol. Great ending as well :D

JACK'S GONNA BE ON DECAFE JACK'S GONNA BE ON DECAFE.

what a naughty little boy.

love it!