Wow is all I can say. This story is remarkable. It is written very well, the characters of Mac and Pete are in character 100% and reading this story is like watching an episode. Fantastic job and I thank you so much for sharing it with us.

ANM88

I really like this story.. very well written... Beautiful... great job!

AWESOME STORY! I LOVE IT! The chocolate-tofu pudding sounds definitely interesting :)) but i had no idea Macgyver was a vegetarian, all the while i thought he eats meat! :P silly me.

WOW that was an intense chapter! Poor Pete, I think he says Mac as a combination of a friend, younger brother and son, so seeing him pass out like that must have scared him pretty badly especially when Mac is so tough. Looking forward to finding out whats going on with Mac.

Gee, poor old MacGyver is really having a rough time isn't he? Another great chapter, loved the interaction between Pete and Mac. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

You have an excellent easy to read plot! It just flows so wonderfully that I feel pulled right into the story, just as if I were watching this play out on TV. Great job!

Glad that you brought Pete into the story! I have always liked the friendship between Pete and Mac. Interesting twist to make the first chapter a dream. Poor Mac, headaches suck!

nice imagery, sounds like beautiful British Columbia where both MacGyver and Stargate SG1 were filmed. I know, I've lived in BC my whole life. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Very good story! Well-written and expressive... Well done!

Great story.

Oh yeah! Mac is definitely back. What a great way to end a fabulous story. Pete drawing his friend back from the edge was wonderful. I'm really glad you got to writing this too and I look forward to whatever else you come up with. Thanks for a great read.

Chocolate Tofu puddin? Tho I don't wanna try this at any cost, yeah, he IS back! Very sweet ending after all the turmoils you have put him (and us) through ;-)
Thanks for having entertained us with this great story, full of emotions and very good suspense. This has encouraged me to follow and join in this fandom too. But it'll be a while before I start posting (storyboard only for now). Thus, definitely looking forward to reading what you have in store for us next. Keep up the good writing!

Aw, yay, Mac's back! :) hehe. What a sweet ending.

You stayed true to the characters and I enjoyed your story very much. Very good ending. Please write more MacGyver stories.

Great story! I really enjoyed it. You do a wonderful job of keeping the characters in character so to speak. :) I look forward to reading other Mac stories that you write.