loved it! and no dialogue was missing from what i can gather. I had it recorded on my phone for a while. (obbsesive i know) i liked how you made it like Mozzie's thoughts instead of Neals. good job

Brilliant. You took something from the screen and deftly transferred it straight to the page, with not one emotion, not one look, not one MOVE, lost in the shuffle. Hats off to you. :-)

Really liked this, gotta love Mozzie

"the man the FBI and Peter Burke has been trying so hard to cage, to domesticate, to tame." - LOVE that line

The last line made me smile

I love it! Great job! I love the way you got into Mozzie's head.

IT WAS A GOOD ONE THANKS HOPE YOU UP DATE WHEN YOU CAN THANKS

love this! :P

You are very good at catching the emotional tones of scenes.

*happy fangirly!squees* This was amazing! Wonderful Mozzie POV! I hadn't seen a story from his view before this one - and I loved it!

I like Mozzie despite myself; this is a good internal narrative.

This was extremely well written. I love it!

I loved this scene, where Neal loses his cool. It is such a contrast to his normally slick and controlled 'con' exterior. It reveals just how human he is, not to mention how sensitive he is about certain topics, including the Peter trust thing. Great moment that you captured nicely! Please write more!

Nice! I liked this episode, especially that one, intense moment... :)

I love your fics. Loved the line about the open,clean,suit-free air. Mozz is great and you can write him well. :o)DA

How do you create these so fast? Once again, fantastic. And the dialog was close enough to perfect that even if some is wrong I didn't notice. I love the way Moz gets so excited over Neal coming back to the dark side, how he watches him intently hanging on his every move. Reading him. It displays their friendship very well. The thing I loved most was when you ended the negative with the positive, "Do it". That was very clever _. Another favorite to add to my vault :D, Nayah