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anon 2/15/06 . chapter 4
Dunno why there aren't more reviews.

Crafily written, great portrayal of the various characters, and a great sense of humour.

Wish you would continue this fic.
Luis Sergio 10/16/05 . chapter 4
I can't stop to thank you about how wonderfull and incredible story you write. The way you picture every caracter, the situations and the way they react. Hope to see an update soon. Thank you.
Celestial Rage 3/15/05 . chapter 4
Great story. I loved the "shopping time" part, it was really funny. The plot is quite interesting and I love your writing style. Please update, Im intrigated by the character that speaks as if she was some kind of trapped GF or something, really I want to know more.

And what is General Caraway involved in? I suppose its related with the earlier, isnt it? Oh, well... Ill have to wait... just hope its not very long...

See ya!
Chloe 10/15/04 . chapter 4
I love the sotry so far! Your are a really talented writer and your in my favourites list!

Please update soon )
lunargirl 4/14/03 . chapter 4
Melia is a meany, leave Squall alone la la la la! No What's up with angelo? Is he going to be ok! I can't bare this the expese is killing me! I really like this story it's really good! It's long but that something I'm getting used to in my atempt to read all your stories (your such a good writer!) I don't like Melia, nope nope nope don't like her at all!

I like Rinoa though shes cool I hope shes ok! AH don't kill Angelo!

The little bits in ilatlics, ya know when those mysterious people are speaking remind me of Ultima VII part II serpent isle. I don't know why but maybe if you have ever played that game you might understand.

You swore... once in this story! Naughty! Teehee only kidding ya do a way better job than most people!

I love this story! Yay! You must update soon! I really don't know what makes me read unfinished stories because they drive me crazy maybe next time I should have the sense to wait till they are finished!

Happy Easter!

I hope the easter bunny brought ya loads of eggies!

Love

Rachel
Steven 4/3/03 . chapter 4
Hey this is a great story. You write the charactes quite well. I hope you still plan on finishing this story. It would suck if you just left it there. Poor Angelo:(
promqueen 10/27/02 . chapter 4
wow ur story is sooo good! )) how come u didnt update it yet? grr lols you use byootiful wordds...and the plot is great...u better email me bak and tell me why you arent updating heh

ive only read this story so far but im gonna read ur others cuz they sound so interesting: "There are those who say that dreams are windows to the soul." that really sounded byootiful *finds out u didnt make it up* lols jk um ya and the picture in ur biography is so pretty! eee hehe ok ya email me bak ))
jade angel 10/6/02 . chapter 4
This fic is simply amazing. I hope that you'll update soon! And though your scene with Squall and Meila in this chapter was certainly great and added more depth to Squall's character, I really hope she won't be a reoccuring character. BTW how you write Angelo is sooooo cute!
Iaya R. White 9/18/02 . chapter 4
CONTINUE!
Hecate 8/6/02 . chapter 4
Hmmm,interesting. Not only does the daughter not get along with Caraway but so does the daughter's anyone? and, what've you done to Angelo? let him be so far,update be.
Vick330 5/16/02 . chapter 4
Nice addition in chapter 3, and sorry it took me so long to R&R. As skillful as always, and I am intrigued by that Skip guy and his connection to Zell. Astounding work on that scene between Squall & Meila, potent and vividly rendered. I also must mention the great work you did in those parts involving Angelo, excellent material and well developped.
Catherine Rain 4/18/02 . chapter 4
Poor, poor Meila. -;;
K 4/16/02 . chapter 4
nice new chapter... poor Angelo, what's gonna happen to him now...
Angelprinczess 4/16/02 . chapter 4
This is excellent! I don't know how I didn't notice this before! Please update soon!
Catherine Rain 4/15/02 . chapter 1
Many of your FF8 characters- Squall, Rinoa, Laguna- are actually canon to me. They come automatically to my mind when I picture the game; I'd have to work to imagine a Squall or a Rinoa who wasn't like yours... It's your forte and I demand that you be proud of it. P
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