GREAT story! I loved it!

Oh dearie me, this was wonderful! So suspenseful! I loved the twist in the tale - Evil!Erik. Considering how much I usually love Erik, he was BAD here. I sincerely wanted Christine to get away - Erik was so scary! And that, I believe, is testament to your writing skills. I loved the end too - Carlotta shooting Erik! HAHA ! payback time i believe - no sympathy for your Erik here. Bravo!

I really like this chapter Erik is so different in this story this is my favourite chapter out of the story. cring what would have happened if Erik succeded? don't worry im an EC fan lol but i don't hate Raoul

Lady Extremely English Voldemort

Ok i have read it but can't review the last chapter again... for all those who say it is out of character I disagree because in the origional novel by GL the phantom is mad and I think would have drugged her...actually maybe not drug her but who knows it's origionaltity so anyone who gives bad reviews... shut up! cos I think Imhilien did a top job!

That was excellant!

This is fantastic! A very original and well written version of the story of the Opear Ghost.

Everyone exept for mabye Christine was out of character. AND YOU KILLED ERIK! Next time try to keep him alive.

This is so shoddy. It's totally out of character for all of them; Erik wouldn't have drugged her (In all of the versions except a couple of the shit movies he wouldn't have even dreamt of it) and Christine wouldn't have stuck up to him like that. "You do not love me you heartless monster!" Cliche. This is completely crap. Commiserations.

Well, it was a well written story, lots of characterization and suspense, I liked that. But, my goodness, your Christine was a bit rough. And :her eyes fill with tears: YOU KILLED MY ERIK! You're a Raoul supporter right? Well, again a very good story, but in your next one... try to keep Erik alive!

Great! loved it without a doubt. write more like this please!

What can I say. I loved the story, Plenty of twists and turns. Inventive, original and full of imagery.

Oh, my goodness . . . Carlotta . . . wow. Well, if you think about it, it is the sort of thing she would do!

I must congratulate you for one of the more original stories around. Most of us are all, "Raoul is an evil idiot, Christine and Erik forever yaaay!" Writing Raoul as heroic, Erik as sinister, and Christine as clever and resourceful takes bravery. (Given, it's probably more what Leroux had in mind, but most writers tend to ignore that.) Wonderful story!

"Apart from her wedding-dress, Christine never wore white again" . . . teeheehee.

Excellent! Keep going, don't keep us in suspense. Does he find her?

OH MY GOD! I'm on the edge of my seat! This is so good, you have to write more! I can't belive how suspenseful that last chapter was! Please write more!

This is great! I really enjoyed chapters 7 & 8 and the suspense for the next chapter is killing me!