Loved the modern day twist!

Beautiful story! :D I love Jareth in this story, and the song is awesome, and really fits! :)

AWW! that is one of the most adorable fics ive read! i wish u wrote a sequel... wait, did u? in any case this story is great ass it is too! its adorable!

awww its so cute!

Sorry, one thing that I forgot to include in my review-you did have one misspelling that I noticed, the "seems" in the very last line. It's supposed to be "seAms". Unless you meant it to be the other way?

Just a little correction that I thought I'd point out, if you don't mind! And sorry for the unsigned post, it won't let me review twice.

Aus

If this counts as songfic, I think I'd have to say that this is one of the only songfics I've EVER liked! I really admired how well you tied in the song, and it was definitely a sweet story. I also liked that Sarah asked for time to think rather than just leaping into it, like a couple other reviewers mentioned. Great fic for a great song (and a -really- great couple)!

Aus

Oh, that was sweet. :3

And I love that song - I only wish that I knew more of them from Owl City, but that's the only one I've ever heard. They don't play any others by them on the radio, and I'm too lazy to look them up. For shame! X)

Anyway, I loved this story - it was really kind and sugarry-sweet. Thanks for this! :D

Jinx

ah! never thought of Fireflies and Labyrinth together. should've known though. Danni Lea and I both love both of em...

Cute story - I liked the interaction between Jareth & Sarah and that she didn't just jump at his offer, 'cause I just can't see Sarah doing that. Never heard of Owl City - I'll have to check them out. Thanks for sharing! :)

i was waiting for someone to write to this song, and you did it brilliantly :)

Wow, oh wow. Oh wow. I was waiting for someone to write a fic with the song. Yours is so perfect. Your characters are on. I loved how flustered Sarah got, and how smug but he open up Jareth was. Best part, he said he would wait! Where are the men like that. *swoon*

Awe :)

I was wondering when an Owl City song would make it into a labyrinth fic.

That was really good! I agree that that song makes me think of Labyrinth. If you've listened to any of Owl City's other songs, many of them make me think of Jareth and Sarah. Especially Vanilla Twilight, If My Heart Was A House, and Saltwater Room. Everytime I hear any of those songs, I immediately think of Labyrinth. :)

O. ! thank god someone did this song i found it so long ago and when i did i couldnt believe all of the coincidences it had with the labyrinth ... im glad im not the only one who thinks so :P the fact he says nothing is as it seems and the fact the band is called owl city ... GOD I LOVE THEM bOTH! and of corse because of that i LOVe this fanfic too ! thanks for doing this ... finaly some one did ... and on the bright side it is amazing also so in a way it is a win win for every one :D ... god this was soo good :D LOVE IT! thanks again for the great fanfic im so happy someone finaly did it :D

AMAZING!

keep up the amazing work !

your faithfull reviewer

Tich-Tich2

Ps. You Made Me So Happy :D

So I'm not the only one who thought that song was a weird coincidence! I thought I was getting a bit obsessed with Labyrinth...then again, I probably am...

I really liked this story, it was sweet and you portrayed Jareth and Sarah true to their characters in the movie. You're a very talented writer, well done :)

xxLauren.