loved it

omg this was one of the cutest stories i ever read! God I loved this so much. It was really well written and adorable and *sigh* I just loved the ending!

Sugoi...it's amazing!

Write MORE! A sequal! Or add another Chapter just SOMETHING! PLEASE! SOOOOOOOOOO CUTE! AHHHHHHHHHH! :D

Oh...My...Freakin...GOD! I had to skip over the entire confession Shuichi did! I was freakin out! My mom is gonna send to a freakin phsychiatric ward! Just Kidding, but still u gave me a freakin heart attack! That principle is a BASTARD! He should die and rot in hell for all of eternity! Just a little fact for you...I'm not allowed to watch anime let alone gay ones, even though I'm 14! But DAMN this story is AWESOME!

Love Ya!

Hahahaha! Eiri is really funny! I hope that jock who called shuichi a fag goes to hell! Did the principle find out? Noooooooo! Well, even if Eiri gets fired he can just get famous by writing a novel! ;) Yay! Igtg read the next chappy! BYE!

"What do you want, Shindou san"

"It's Shuichi, and what I want is pretty simple, you"

Hahahahahaha! That was pretty straight forward... o.O

I laughed so hard in this chapter! ;)

Awesome! You captured Shuichi perfectly! If he was in High School He TOTALLY wouldn't consent to wearing the uniform like he was supposed to! And I like what you've done with Eiri! He's really cool! Well igtg read the next chapter! bye!

Adorable story. I normally don't like Gravitation AUs but you make it work!

o.o... uh oh... RUN SHUICHI RUN! Gawds! This is getting GOOD! keep on writing stories

I cannot describe enough how much fun this was to read. Right from the start, there was the same kind of captivating intrigue that I found in the series. Delicately written, not too amateurish, not out to prove anything - just pure, enjoyable entertainment that is a rare, but adorably pleasant, find. A true joy to read.

Personally, I'm glad that angst didn't take the spotlight in this. I think that it would have created more clichés than the story needed. The clichés present actually work for the story. Shuichi's candid nature and uninhibited public exclamations, and even a surprising one from Yuki himself, all made me sink into my chair in total embarrassment for the both of them, but at the same time, made me laugh so freely, and gave me that same warm feeling I got from reading the manga, which was quite a long time ago. The pluses just all add up for this charming, light-hearted story.

This is a lovely piece that encompasses the themes and atmosphere that made me adore Gravitation in the first place. Thank you for the wonderful nostalgia.

YOU ARE AMAZING!

oh...

I loved it!

*is suddenly speechless*

well...ehhm...just wow...

-P...

really, the chapter was great...

but, the words in japanese, I don't understand them!

Nani, I guess is: what?

baka, I guess is: Idiot

but, what means Desu and Hajimemashite?

really, They kind of distracted me from the story.

Your writing in English, not in Japanese. so please, don't put random japanese words in it.

what's the point?

it only shows that you watch too much anime...

besides that, I really loved the first chapter, so I'm gonna go read the rest!

hehehe. You put Yuki there really well! he kind of reminds me of Snape from Harry Potter.

this part was really good:

"This is your language, it's fundamental to all communication you undertake. How can you function as members of society if you can't grasp its richness? These aren't just some wishy-washy shoujo mangas we're reading here, it's art. Literature is language at it's most expressive, its deepest. If you aren't willing to look beyond your own small minds to encounter it, there is very little I can teach you."

in character and something a Literature teacher (sensei) definitely would say!

(oh, and I'm sorry for me whining about your Japanese, when i can't even spell properly. I'm not English and it took me two years to learn the Language through reading. Besides that, i think your grammar was great!)

and Shuichi is soo cute! I loved the little details.

thank you for taking the time to read my review!

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yay

that was brilliant!

i really truly loved it!