Adorable story. I normally don't like Gravitation AUs but you make it work!

o.o... uh oh... RUN SHUICHI RUN! Gawds! This is getting GOOD! keep on writing stories ^^

I cannot describe enough how much fun this was to read. Right from the start, there was the same kind of captivating intrigue that I found in the series. Delicately written, not too amateurish, not out to prove anything - just pure, enjoyable entertainment that is a rare, but adorably pleasant, find. A true joy to read.

Personally, I'm glad that angst didn't take the spotlight in this. I think that it would have created more clichés than the story needed. The clichés present actually work for the story. Shuichi's candid nature and uninhibited public exclamations, and even a surprising one from Yuki himself, all made me sink into my chair in total embarrassment for the both of them, but at the same time, made me laugh so freely, and gave me that same warm feeling I got from reading the manga, which was quite a long time ago. The pluses just all add up for this charming, light-hearted story.

This is a lovely piece that encompasses the themes and atmosphere that made me adore Gravitation in the first place. Thank you for the wonderful nostalgia.

YOU ARE AMAZING!

oh...
I loved it!
*is suddenly speechless*
well...ehhm...just wow...
-P...

really, the chapter was great...

but, the words in japanese, I don't understand them!
Nani, I guess is: what?
baka, I guess is: Idiot
but, what means Desu and Hajimemashite?
really, They kind of distracted me from the story.
Your writing in English, not in Japanese. so please, don't put random japanese words in it.

what's the point?
it only shows that you watch too much anime...

besides that, I really loved the first chapter, so I'm gonna go read the rest!
hehehe. You put Yuki there really well! he kind of reminds me of Snape from Harry Potter.

this part was really good:

"This is your language, it's fundamental to all communication you undertake. How can you function as members of society if you can't grasp its richness? These aren't just some wishy-washy shoujo mangas we're reading here, it's art. Literature is language at it's most expressive, its deepest. If you aren't willing to look beyond your own small minds to encounter it, there is very little I can teach you."

in character and something a Literature teacher (sensei) definitely would say!

(oh, and I'm sorry for me whining about your Japanese, when i can't even spell properly. I'm not English and it took me two years to learn the Language through reading. Besides that, i think your grammar was great!)

and Shuichi is soo cute! I loved the little details.
thank you for taking the time to read my review!
-P...

yay
that was brilliant!
i really truly loved it!

Cute!
Definitely Gravi! I wish it had been longer! ;) -FG

I know those are real toppings... *shudders* the Italians must be screaming obscenities. Anyway, not bad so far. I like most of it actually. The only thing I dont like is that usual mixture of Japanese and English you get with a lot of fanfictions. But whatever, I can look past them. And I suppose I understand why people use them...actually I dont.

ANYWAY, that was very rude. Sorry. I hope nothing horrible happens to Eiri. Even if he can be a bit of a bastard when you're not paying attention. :P -FG

Whoo! This story has some potential! -FG

that was amazing. one of the best gravitation stories i've ever read. i'm so glad I got a chance to read this ^__^

-is favoriting this story obviously...-

hehe.

=Kaori-Tenshi NaNoDa

Yipee! Happy ending!~

your story was very good and well written. good job. :D I enjoyed every second of reading it.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT.

This story was a *great* AU. The characters were still very recognizable, but the plot was just different enough to make the premise fresh. It was surprisingly short, but at the end, turns out to be the perfect length. The ending is satisfying and the story somehow runs at a perfect pace through only 7 chapters, never feeling slow or rushed. And of course, the banter between Eiri and Shuichi doesn't hurt either. They'll always be their obnoxious, fighting selves. :-P