Interesting story, I'm not much for OCs but it works, it humors me that Isa is always the experiment and somehow I always love the angsty Saix/Isa backstory. I'm sad you killed off Isa ;(. But I guess that was expected b/c he had no fight left in him. Good story, hope for more out of you, especially concerning Isa!

Whoa.

What an ending.

Nice descriptions of everything that went on. Wow - this was a really intense story. Nice work AC. :)

Incredible ending for this chapter! It seems as if Brad is on their side, and yet not.

Poor Hayley. :(

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Are you serious?

I did not see this coming yet. :o

Eep! That Berserker gene sounds awful! :( But totally cool and wicked at the same time. XD

Uh-oh. Sounds like the Master is pissed off. And cool new character from Christmastown. :D

Nice job on this chapter.

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Poor Isa.

Nice job on this chapter. :)

Yikes. That girl cat is in for some serious problems.

Again, I can't say it enough - your descriptions of everything taking place is totally awesome! :D

Wow. :o

I like how you write the accent. I can hear the lilt in the voice for Ari.

Nice work on this chapter. :)

Ooooooh - Hayley is mad! :D

I like the character you introduced - Ari? Cool guy. Well, seems like it. I'm sure he's more helpful than harmful. At least, that's what I'm hoping.

Nice job, my dear. :D

Uh-oh! What's in the tree?

Nice work on this chapter. And who is this Vincent? He's not a very nice Master, as it were.

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Poor Isa! That's so horrible! :( I like your description of how he took down the deer though. Nice job. :)

Awesome!

I really like how you paint the picture, it's really easy to see everything as you intend it. :) Nice work.