A great story. Very good.

Wow, talk about regrets! Moral of story-never miss an opportunity to tell those we love how much they mean to us! Take nothing for granted, we may not get another chance!

That was very sweet. it brought a tear to my eye.

Nice to have the other perspective. Excellent sequal to another good story!

whoa...quite nice...though it's Qui-gon's poi, it's nice. Sweet.

That was absolutely beautiful. You are a very talented writer. I love how you portrayed Qui-Gon's emotions toward Obi-Wan like a father toward a son (I really hate the slashs!).
So keep up the good work!

That was good. Poetic justice for gui-gon, he deserves his anguish in my opinion. But you did kind of make mefeel sorry for him.

Nicely done. Good, strong emotional imagery - and a satisfying thump in the chest for those of us who think Qui-Gon acted like a louse as he lay dying.

Aww...! Awesome story! So sad but a great ending! :)

Very bittersweet and heartbreaking! You've nicely conveyed that sadly, Qui-Gon's earnest, yet too little...too late regrets can do nothing to assuage his padawan's anguish. Very well done!