The suspense is evil. I love it. What a plot twist. This is such an eerie fic, but it really draws you in. Update soon!

Okay now I'm really, really at the edge of my seat. What's going on?

Oh and it might not be pertinent but I'm kind of curious about how old Jonny is in this story.

I'm definitely keeping watch. Great job!

Talk about suspense! I have goosebumps. Can't wait for more!

Oh man! Keep the chapters coming. I'm really anxious to find out who's-who's though. Or at least, what accident happened to JB and the other male character in the past.

Cool chapter! Please write more.

Wow. What the heck is going on? I'm so intrigued. Keep it up.

I like this. I would definitely like to see a completion, here. I love the ambiguity of the story. We don't really know what's going on, but we know when we find out it will all make sence.

Please, please continue.

Oh, you've gotta continue this! This is an amazing piece of work. What's wrong with Jessie, what happened to her to make her so skittish? And what's wrong with Jonny? Was he the boy you were describing in the first chapter? Poor Bandit . . . CONTIUE! You're going on my favorite authors list right now!

You've got an interesting premise here. My only nitpick would be to stick with the same tense. It tends to be annoying when sentences jump from present to past.

Great beginning. Lots of questions, but I'm sure you'll answer them soon.

What happened? What is going on? This is interesting and I hope that you write more soon! ;)

Wow! Suspenseful! And then ya left it with a cliffhanger! Pleeeeease write more soon! I look forward to reading more! ;)

this is strange but intriguing. Please tell me you are going to have the scene where Jess meets her Dad?