I'm not exactly sure what's going on and even though you said something about not reading it in the story describtion if you couldn't understand what's going on, I just wanted to say how awesome it is to actually read something with correct junction, sentences, spelling, just English all together.

Great story plot also. :)

Lynx

Dude, I don't have any words for this.

"She managed to pull the sword out of Tato's hands. Her own hands were bleeding."

When I read that, my mind registered: Nagato's knife catch during the Asakura vs. Nagato episode (And of course, even though Mythbusters disproved it, the normal laws of physics don't apply to Nagato).

I hope Akai can join the society soon. But before that, I'll have to finish our collab. -Narrowly dodges bullet-

Next fandom is FFXI? Hm, would that be considered blacklisted?

Well, anyways, awesome job!

P.S. On a somewhat (un)related note, Lightning's seiyu is Sakamoto Maaya, who voices Ciel (Black Butler), Haruhi (Ouran), Tomoyo-hime (Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles), and Mari Illustrious Makinami (Evangelion). Lebreau is voiced by none other than Asakawa Yu. So, we've got Koizumi, Tsumugi, Luka/Motoko/Sakaki, and Haruhi/Ciel running around with airships, chocobos, and religion-based summons. Whoot!

Chrys is still sad, I will remind you, just like anyone else in the Society. But she's at least not a vegetable.

Hrgh need to finish games so I can write fics hrgh.

Bwah, Tato was definitely her characteristic snarky in this fic, don't you think? I like the abusive monologue; it fits her. /shot

Right. Interesting. I have a suspicion about that voice of Aster's... I'm pobably wrong though.

Keep up the good work!

Am I to understand from your post in Lets Talk 2 that you finished writing this fic in just a couple of hours? Great job if you did!

I didn't anticipate the Aster/Chrys role reversal. I hope Aster will be okay, and hopefully Chrys and Akai can help her pull through too in the future. Looking forward to your FFXI fic!

I'm becoming more and more suspicious that I'm right about that voice, although I could be wrong. All in all it was a good fic, but you're forgetting one thing, Tash seceded leadership of the ACMSES to Micheal, so Aster should have been going to him for all the leadership and mission stuff.

This was amazing. Period. And not just because of the battle. I'm talking about the twisted, dark atmosphere that you created. I never thought that someone so used to writing crack could write something so dark and make it look like they've been doing it their entire career here. Well done. I feel sorry for Aster, though. Here's hoping that she recovers in the future, at least to the point where she has her sanity back. Excellent from start to finish and I'm eagerly waiting for your next Society fic.

Knew you'd get it done! Awesome job my dear. And if this doesn't kick season two in the rear to get moving properly I don't know what will.

In the mean time, better arrange therapy for Aster. . .

Thumbs up for the MythBusters insert.

I need to be careful what kind of music I have playing while reading fanfiction. *shakes off shivers*

You're hinting at a lot of things to come, plot-wise.

Keep writing!