 rarestlove27 2009-10-16 . chapter 1This was so cute! I think Dumbles knows whats going on...
This might sound slow but what did Sev say? Was it something along the lines of "Stay with me" or "Dont leave"? The suspense is killing me!
:D |
 Carrietta Dragana 2009-08-15 . chapter 1This story is so funny! Yay! |
 Double Spell 2009-08-04 . chapter 1like everyone else, i must ask: what did he say?! |
 kitcat19us 2009-05-17 . chapter 1great story |
 Katanagirl16 2009-05-12 . chapter 1AWESOME and really funny! |
 LoveMeSomeMPregSlash 2009-05-05 . chapter 1Wait, what did he say?! |
 The Dark Lord Mudblood 2009-04-25 . chapter 1I love the wit you have in this piece, as well as the accompanying one. I also like how your Harry is so playful, so flirty, and so *absolutely* devoid of tact. Good job, and I wouldn't mind seeing more like this. |
 allison reeve 2008-11-17 . chapter 1this was fantastic but i am dying to know what did snape say? |
 Satan's Angelic Mistress 2008-10-09 . chapter 1What did he say?
And on a more constructive note, your grammar is... not great, really. E.g. “Whatever else you’ve been, you’re always consistent.” should be "Whatever else you are, you've always been consistent." and Snape's response is also in a rather broken form of English, and far less sensical even than what Harry said. And Snape just... would die if he spoke in a form of English less coherent than Harry's, so it's not just grammatical errors that are annoying, but ones that disrupt the continuity of characterisation.
I like it though, it's cute, and I STILL want to know what he said. |
 JessSnapeRickman 2008-08-22 . chapter 1this is pure briliance^^ so cute
'“What are you DOING?” Snape yelled, his voice rising to a hysterical shriek on the last word.' made me lol xD
what did he say?! hah, I sound like everyone else ^^
x JSR |
 Squibakou 2008-08-12 . chapter 1huh? *gasp* What did he say?! Cruel person. Hmf. Just cause you wrote an awesome fic. |
 ConnectedByTheStars 2008-02-18 . chapter 1Okay, I know this question has probably been asked repeatedly, but what on earth did Sev say? I cannot figure it out, and it's killing me here. Please please tell me!
~Musiclover953
P.S. Awesome story! ^_^ |
 firedraygon 2008-02-16 . chapter 1Hee, I love the slow infiltration of Severus' quarters. This is such a cute fic. The little drinking contest at the beginning is so amusing, especially how Harry 'challenges' Severus. Great work with this!
~fd97 |
 puretsubasa 2008-01-17 . chapter 1Wow! That was a great piece of writing. But what did Sev say?!?! The suspense was killing me! I should of known that you would end it this way...DAMN IT AL! Anyways, congrats on this story. I really liked it. Especially how Harry just seem to merge into Sev's life and how Sev knew it, but not realize what was happening because the idea did not fully hit him. Did Sev say something like "just this once"? |
 dgpolo 2007-10-02 . chapter 1Just found this and the Horoscope fic, I love them. This one is sweet with Snape being all insecure. And the coffee in the Horoscope one is hilarious. |