Interesting way to show Mac. Very creative ;)

so sad poor macavity. i know he wasent that bd but im still scard of him. hey what do you expect iam demeter

Aw. Poor Maccie.

Aw! how sad! i've wanted to write a story like this for a long time, but it's never worked. I can't write like that! it's not fair! *cries, but goes off to read more*

nice char for Mac, but horrible fluff through out.

wow! that was great - you didn't try to just excuse Mac completely, and yet he was still *real* and understandable... and I kinda feel sorry for him... :(

O.O! WAAAAAAAAH! ::sobs:: WAAAAAAAAAAAH! POOR MAC!

::relaizes what she just said:: o.o ::blinks::

It takes a good writer to make me feel sorry for Mac and not Dem. Great job, Jess _

Aww... I love Maccy! Thanks for writing something decent and emotional about him. :)

Oh how I love this...this is JUST how I see Maccy. It's great Sarah, and is going straight on my faves. And thanks for the thanks! XD Demi was great too. Oh I love it. Now I must log in to add it. XD Byes!