This is quite funny! I look forward to more! )

Awesome. Love the lotion. Best use of "aforementioned" in a fic, ever.

I so much enjoyed this chapter! I really need a good cute, funny story like to balance out all the freaking angst I seem to be getting elsewhere. I had to laugh at Edward's battery of test after he had the chest pains, I guess this is very new to him. Looking forward to see how the story progresses!

Can't wait to read more.

Cute start, can't wait for more!

This is a wonderful beginning, hilarious and compelling. Your Edward had me laughing continuously; this is a very promising and refreshing opening. I am looking forward to seeing how this story progresses and learning more about their encounter. Thank you for writing.

I love it! Thanks to Caren for sending me the link. So funny. I'm really looking forward to reading more.

This is awesome! You had me gigglesnorting the entire way through. Especially the part about Edward having a cardiogram and full battery of tests done due to the ache in his chest. HILARIOUS. I get the feeling this will be a very interesting and fun ride that I can't wait to take.

The teaser on The Fictionators has me dying for the next update!

Found your story when I was checking out the teasers on The Fictionators website. I accidentally clicked on your link and am so glad I did. Can't wait to follow along, this looks like it's going to be fun. :)

Oh gotta love Awkward Eddie. I found this on fictionators. so props to them. Haha uh.. yeah can't wait for chapter 2!

sweet and funny! I d love to read more :)

Oh girls... One of you sent us a teaser at The Fictionators, and you hooked me. I had to come check this out, and I am absolutely loving this. I haven't giggled this much over a story in a while, so I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of what you two have planned.

Edward seems like a cute geek, and this line about killed me: 'PS. What type of lotion do you use? I would like to purchase some. For my sister, of course.' and of course her answer, HAHAHAH! 'P.S. I think I was wearing suntan lotion the night I met you. It smells like coconut. I'm sure your sister has some already.'

I already like your Bella, she's snarky and fun. Being from the Berkeley area, this comment was particularly hilarious to me: 'I'm not a lesbian, I hate Birkenstocks and I do shave my underarms…as well as other things. (But, I guess you know that, too.)'

Wish I was moving on to the next chapter, but seeing as this is the only one, I'll wait (impatiently) for whats next.

Thanks girls!

xoxo

Caren

Oh. My. Funny.

Please excuse me while I pick myself up off the floor. I am convulsing in fits of laughter. At sometime in the near future, I may have a coherent comment to make about the actual content. For now... I'm just going to giggle some more.

You better update cos this is the funniest shit I've read in a while. Edward is such a nerd! bwahahahahahah

I read the teaser on The Fictionators which is what pointed me in the direction of this here story. Looking forward to more!

Great start :)