|Reviews for Love in My Box|
| RaeCullen 3/1/10 . chapter 1
This is quite funny! I look forward to more! )
| nitareality 3/1/10 . chapter 1
Awesome. Love the lotion. Best use of "aforementioned" in a fic, ever.
| sakari-x 3/1/10 . chapter 1
I so much enjoyed this chapter! I really need a good cute, funny story like to balance out all the freaking angst I seem to be getting elsewhere. I had to laugh at Edward's battery of test after he had the chest pains, I guess this is very new to him. Looking forward to see how the story progresses!
| fairytaleland 3/1/10 . chapter 1
Can't wait to read more.
| kay321 3/1/10 . chapter 1
Cute start, can't wait for more!
| silver sniper of night 3/1/10 . chapter 1
This is a wonderful beginning, hilarious and compelling. Your Edward had me laughing continuously; this is a very promising and refreshing opening. I am looking forward to seeing how this story progresses and learning more about their encounter. Thank you for writing.
| dizziestdaydream 3/1/10 . chapter 1
I love it! Thanks to Caren for sending me the link. So funny. I'm really looking forward to reading more.
| bellamarie117 3/1/10 . chapter 1
This is awesome! You had me gigglesnorting the entire way through. Especially the part about Edward having a cardiogram and full battery of tests done due to the ache in his chest. HILARIOUS. I get the feeling this will be a very interesting and fun ride that I can't wait to take.
The teaser on The Fictionators has me dying for the next update!
| ECis4Me 3/1/10 . chapter 1
Found your story when I was checking out the teasers on The Fictionators website. I accidentally clicked on your link and am so glad I did. Can't wait to follow along, this looks like it's going to be fun. :)
| Hollister1474 3/1/10 . chapter 1
Oh gotta love Awkward Eddie. I found this on fictionators. so props to them. Haha uh.. yeah can't wait for chapter 2!
| pilotnana 3/1/10 . chapter 1
sweet and funny! I d love to read more :)
| nerac 3/1/10 . chapter 1
Oh girls... One of you sent us a teaser at The Fictionators, and you hooked me. I had to come check this out, and I am absolutely loving this. I haven't giggled this much over a story in a while, so I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of what you two have planned.
Edward seems like a cute geek, and this line about killed me: 'PS. What type of lotion do you use? I would like to purchase some. For my sister, of course.' and of course her answer, HAHAHAH! 'P.S. I think I was wearing suntan lotion the night I met you. It smells like coconut. I'm sure your sister has some already.'
I already like your Bella, she's snarky and fun. Being from the Berkeley area, this comment was particularly hilarious to me: 'I'm not a lesbian, I hate Birkenstocks and I do shave my underarms…as well as other things. (But, I guess you know that, too.)'
Wish I was moving on to the next chapter, but seeing as this is the only one, I'll wait (impatiently) for whats next.
| brittCboo 3/1/10 . chapter 1
Oh. My. Funny.
Please excuse me while I pick myself up off the floor. I am convulsing in fits of laughter. At sometime in the near future, I may have a coherent comment to make about the actual content. For now... I'm just going to giggle some more.
| xtothey 3/1/10 . chapter 1
You better update cos this is the funniest shit I've read in a while. Edward is such a nerd! bwahahahahahah
I read the teaser on The Fictionators which is what pointed me in the direction of this here story. Looking forward to more!
| jimemon 2/28/10 . chapter 1
Great start :)