Hope you do more with this one. I thought the fortune teller was kind of creepy, but in a really cool way.
:)

I hope he goes after her!

I was hoping you would say that!

AAwe! a tear.

o! I think this would be a great story.

I would love for this one to turn into something more.

That's so sad, though I'm glad she got the children. I wish the lawyer had been able to tell her she was special.

Thanks for the story!

It was an excellent little snippet. Good for Bella for fighting for her kids and overcoming the odds. Loved it!

this would make a really beautiful story!

Oh, that just warms my heart as much as it breaks it! Another blurb that could be the start of something bigger...

That was really sweet.

That brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.

LOVE this and think it would make a fabulous multi-chap fic. ;)

*gasp* This was short. Any reason for that? *wink* I'm hoping so after the AN for the previous chapter :)

Susan

GAH! Sobbing now but so sweet! LOved it!