I agree that she seemed a little obsessive here but hey that just goes with what was written on the first chapter about how she dislikes the fact that women pursuing men are frowned upon. great story! also (before I forget) you showed another Kakashi here, not the man-whore type written in almost kakasaku fics. this is a really fresh read.

Unbelievably amazing writing is all I can bring myself to say O.O extremely well done. DAMN!

(usurping an unused review slot for my final commentary.)

I also love how several of the other stories that you have written were mentioned between Sakura and Temari. XD

I giggled a lot.

hehehe... well done.

I enjoyed it very much.

bwahahahaha!

I love Temari.

Bravo!

That was a nice ending.

I know you didn't have control over the plot, but something feels not quite tied up, although I'm afraid I can't place what it is.

I don't think Kakashi was bothered enough over Sakura's supposed death, but there's something else too...

I think I'll have to go and read the Shakespeare & see if I feel the same way!

Thanks for another great read!

Cheers,

'You' x

Top marks, once again! Your style is so intelligent yet easy to read, and I love your attention to detail, as always!

I'm really enjoying this so far & can't wait to move on to chapter 4, but I clicked to view the reviews by accident and was pretty surprised that those i read feel the opposite way I do about it.

I actually feel huge sympathy for Kakashi. He's been forced into a marriage he didn't choose and has now, for the first time on his life, found someone he wants to share his life with. I find it unbearably sad that he can't have it because it was all an illusion created by Sakura.

She is such an obsessive little harpy here, its horrible! If she really loved him she would have apologised to him & shown her respect for him by letting him go. Love is built on respect, after all.

I also feel a but of regret for Temari too, as she obviously liked Kakashi and enjoyed his company, and in other circunstances...

I don't know the play, but will be digging out my Complete Works tonight!

Fab work '-)

God.. why do you make kakashi such a bastard. i can't for the life of me, understand why sakura still can love him for the "supposedly" betrayal with temari.. in a book of five rings, i can understand it.. she's mad at him, but eventually forgives him trough time in a proccess. and we can see kakashi is changing for the better. so i love the ending.

while after reading this story i had this huge urge to beat the shit out of kakashi..

that said, i still think you are a great story teller. i can only hope to have your writing skill. hope in your next story kakashi will be a little nicer. cause i so love kakaxsaku!

"So many toys, so little time." That made me crack-up. Oh Kakashi, you kink.

Indeed, all's well that ends well. :D

Truly enjoyed reading it, bravo!

Sakuraharu: you made me laugh and feel anguished in the same chapter :D I do believe you're a talented writer. I just can't stop loving everything you create. Keep up the amazing work!

hmmm not my favorite of your stories i was expecting more plot and well less loose ends and all but given the constraints it seems pretty well done.

i really don't know why she cares so much for him... the story certainly is interesting though. i wonder what temari's going to do...

i love temari. and wait they have something in store for genma? yes this'll be very interesting indeed.