Its... Sad... Bwawawawawawa!

this story has the possibility of being furthered into a longer story... it would be quite intresting to say the least.

you are also one of the few writers that write GinxHitsugaya FatherxSon fanfics, so you are officially one of my fav authers!

I totally love this! I never would have thought of Gin being Toshiroʻs daddy! Great job! :)

Love it!:D

Yep, things are back to Hinamori being oblivious, definitely.

I really liked this one. Angst with a bit of comic relief at the end. :D

hey

well done

great new story

i liked this it was good

i had to reread the end twice to make sense of it

but another great story

continue writing cant wait for the next story of chapter

10/10

Haylie Myers

You wouldn't think Toshiro would ever think of killing himself. A child he may be, but he should be above such thoughts.

Funny how Retsu was able to figure out the parentage of Toshiro like that.

Very interesting way for Gin to reveal the truth to Rangiku. Can't wait to see how you do it in some of your other stories.

I thought there would be another chapter and I kinda look forward it until I read your AN.

So finally Shiro found out who's his parent?

I wonder what would he do after found out it.

so Toshi Finaly put Two and Two together? I think this deserves a sequel... I loved this fic I really 's funny how Hinamori can be oblivious and naive at times...

Poor Toshi...

I loved this. I until I stared reading your fic's I hated Gin, now I fill a little scary for him. I'd love to see some of your future story's bast off of this one.

Very very good. Loved it.