This was too cute! I love how they were all nervous and giddy, it reminds me a bit of how I am at first when I'm around a guy I like. I really do hope that you continue this, whether it be a full story or a couple accompanying one-shots. I'd love to see their first date, maybe a little bit of citrusy goodness... ;)

This was...so heartwarmingly wonderful. I seriously want more. You gave them such character, depth for a one shot, it's so wonderful to see. Christ I'm babbling. Sorry. Suffice to say I love it, and I'm so glad I read it. Thank you for writing it.

very sweet

I liked "these two" as you describe them...

well written as all you work is...

and I hope there will be a little more...

Oh my god. SO sweet. Stuttering Edward has stolen my heart. Beautifully written, as always. Are you really going to continue this (squee!)? I'd love to read more about these two, and see how Emmett makes it up to Edward.

That was so sweet! I love Nerdward! I can totally relate to dodgeball related panic-I was one of those kids that worried about being picked last. Sadistic gym teachers!

I'm a huge fan of your writing & I dearly love angst, but how freaking sweet was that! Well written fluff always has a place in my world. I hope that others were lucky enough to have similar firsts(I was) & I would love to see this continued.

WOOHOO for Nerdward! LOVED IT!

aw! hearts

Oh! Please please million pleases with cherries on top! I would love to read more from these two! Stutterward has just become my favorite of them all... God, that was sweet beyond words! Uggh! I love it! I've got a cheesy, mad grin on my face and I'm glad I'm alone or else it might be your fault I'll get sent to an insane asylum...

Bella was so sweet... Eww... P.E. was hell for me! I was never chosen last, but that was more because I was lucky my friends were team captains than because of my "mad skills." This story brings back so many memories for me.. Including one involving my face and a soccer ball... *shudder* In all seriousness, I would love to read more about this Bella and Edward. I'm curious as to what their stories are and how they'll progress as a couple. I love these two! They're beyond cute!

Thank you so much for writing this and avoiding godawful cliches. This can turn into a fantastic story, I can already tell!

Btw, sorry about my excited rambling... :]

This was one of my favorite one/shots from the Haiti compilation. I'd love to see some more of their firsts :-)

Absolutely delightful! Thanks for sharing as always bb 3

LOVED this:) I read this as part of the Haiti Compilation:) This is such a sweet story. I have a huge smile on my face. Edward and Bella holding hands and their kiss, so sweet and cute. I love these two and would love for you to continue this one day. I have you on author alert so i will not miss anything.

aw, I would totally love to read more of these two. Loved it when I read it in the Haiti doc, and love it now too.

I was telling my son how a friend and I used to get passes out of gym as much as we could- we were usually found hanging out at the college counselor's office or the AP American History teacher's office. Those were the days.

That was so dang sweet it made my teeth hurt a little bit. Just a sweet way with words, you have. I wish I had a geeky Edward to play dodgeball with in high school. We just had sweaty jocks.

Emmett throwing the ball at Edward was mean. Enjoyed seeing the characters do something that isn't normally done