|Reviews for First Impressions|
| NotInUSeeANyMORE 3/19/10 . chapter 7
"Can we go home now?" begged 2D, voice muffled by the fact that his face was buried in Paula's bosom."
Aha, that made me laugh my face off. Another great chapter.
| JemKat 3/18/10 . chapter 7
You have Murdoc down perfectly. I can totally see him pulling the "Fuck Your Lease" stunt XD
Isn't Paula a bit wimpy? I always imagined her as a bit spaced out and apathetic. :P
As always, can't wait for the next set of lulz _
| NotInUSeeANyMORE 3/18/10 . chapter 6
Aww, poor Murdoc. No one appreciates his vocal talents. ;)
| Sushirisu 3/17/10 . chapter 6
Another great chapter! I can't wait to read more!
| NotInUSeeANyMORE 3/17/10 . chapter 5
Every chapter makes me laugh out loud at some point. Your use of humor and akward situations is amazing.
"...no more getting yelled at by the landlord for the clashing and shouting as he tried to steer the f-ing wheelchair around the building or gave up and shoved it down the stairs."
| Sushirisu 3/17/10 . chapter 5
I'm glad you told me about this one. It's awesome! I don't know what else to say. I can't point out what I like about it; there are many elements I like that pointing them all out would take forever.
I'm definitely keeping an eye on this. This is so great!
| JemKat 3/16/10 . chapter 5
Woop! New chapter - just as lolworthy as the others.
"evidently they hadn't spoken to his landlord about his games of Downstairs Wheelchair Ride" - that part really got me XD
The images it conjured...wrong, but priceless...
Looking forward to reading the next bit _
| skitzoism 3/15/10 . chapter 5
Oh 2-D, so sweet, so unknowing on how jealous you're probably going to make Murdoc with Paula. Paula, every fan girls worst nightmare. Wonder how this is going to tie into your story, with Murdoc and Paula's sticky past. x_x; And how you're going to have 2-D forgive him (I assume?), I'm looking forward to as well. You left this chapter ending with suspense; can't wait to find out what happens!
| Guest 3/15/10 . chapter 5
I'm really liking this story. 2D is adorable and I like how you write Muds. Can't wait to read more
| Beyond-The-Limit 3/13/10 . chapter 4
Calm down, missus Tusspot! He woke your baby!
Aw hell, I lurv this chapter. I laughed at the picture of young Muds dancing around the parking lot screaming about his luck. XD
I might have to draw that sometime. :P
| skitzoism 3/12/10 . chapter 4
Haha, I absolutely love your use of humor. In my last review, I totally forgot to mention how I literally laughed out loud at the image of 2-D falling down multiple sets of stairs still in the wheelchair; fucked up, but that's why it's so ridiculously funny.
Love the three thoughts going on in Murdoc's head at the same time, thinking a little too much about Stu, eh? Awesome last line from 2-D, too. Can't wait to see how the meet up again, keep up the great story.
| NotInUSeeANyMORE 3/11/10 . chapter 3
This chapter made me cringe. In a good way.
Thank God for Murdoc's conscience. :D
Keep up the good work!
| JemKat 3/10/10 . chapter 3
The pairing makes me cringe - but I think any pairing with Murdoc in it would do that :p
This has been really making me giggle - you've gotten Murdoc spot on, and even though I'm an anti-fan of the pairing, I look forward to reading more. :)
| skitzoism 3/10/10 . chapter 3
First and foremost, I want to apologize for my last comment getting all messed up, I don't know why that exactly happened? Anyway, this story is really catching my attention and there might be only one other story in my memory portraying Stu in his comatose state and Murdoc taking care of him, at least one that was good enough to remember. I love when stories show Murdoc/2-D's attraction budding from the start, since there a good number of them that have them develop like, a new found lust (if that makes any sense?). Now that's awesome, I love stories like that as well, but it's a nice change to read a good story like this. Can I just add that you do make Murdoc...sweet? Is that the right word? While managing to keep him in character. Now when I think about it, sweet is a little too much, but you definitely show a side of him being more than an asshole, which personally I always enjoyed in Muds/2-D fics as well. And good choice Muds; that situation was definitely a 'turn off' situation, haha.
There is only one thing I think when reading this. More! Can't wait for more chapters. ) Got me to write a fairly long comment, at least to my standards.
| NotInUSeeANyMORE 3/7/10 . chapter 2
I love the conversations Murdoc has with other poeple. They're so akward, yet lovely. ;)
I'm exited to see more.