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liz
2004-07-28
ch 5, anon.
abusei liked this chapter!
liz
2004-07-28
ch 4, anon.
abusegood job,lightning strike
liz
2004-07-28
ch 3, anon.
abusepoor panda.good job on the story so far!
liz
2004-07-28
ch 2, anon.
abusei loved this chapter.good spelling.
liz
2004-07-28
ch 1, anon.
abusei will always read and review to your stories because they are so good.i love this story!
Morbane
2002-08-14
ch 5,
abuseThank you for writing with both feet firmly in the reality of the human psyche.

I wouldn't have expected either rival to act maturely in the presence of the other - I'd expect them to shoot up sparks. You did it wonderfully.

Where *did* Trina get the idea that Amana had two Pokemon - even though she was right? Hmm, that girl's got good intuition.

Panda being cute as usual...

And I love the Vaporeon's new name!

Please Keep Writing. You're beating me hands down in character development.

I'm about to send you an email in place of the fifty I owe you for my absence last week. A better explanation will be contained within.
Dawn the Espeon
2002-08-08
ch 5,
abuseD.t.E: great chapter!! more, more!! LunaVee? Cute!! ^~^ wad type of Eon is it? Moon type? cant wait for it to evolve!! I bet that it'll be cute!! ^^

*Espeon(Dawndancer) growls in some jealousy*

D.t.E: *adds hastily* of course, Dawndancer's the best!!

*Dawndancer starts to purr*

D.t.E: ^^; Well, update your fic soon!! (hopefully i'll be able to do the same to mine...-_-;)
Treble Clef Julianne
2002-08-06
ch 5,
abuseLunavee sounds very cute, and with a sweet name too. ^_^

And I liked the meeting between Amana and Trina. They're enemies, but I like 'em both (well, they're very well-developed characters, so how could I not? ^^).
Morbane
2002-08-05
ch 4,
abuseOh, you made it a songfic! Well done! I love some of the lines. But did Shandra have to nearly *kill* Panmaro to get her point across? And what did Panmaro do to heal himself and what does it have to do with Trina? (Answers own question: clearly a lot).

I really hope you planned out as far as the next chapter, too. *hands D-L-S some rations for the long haul*. BTW, email isn't working tonight. Grrrrrrrr...

You're a fanfic queen.
Dawn the Espeon
2002-08-04
ch 4,
abusegreat story!! what type is the Vampireon? i noe that this is from chapter 1, but i only review after i read all there is ^^;. well, i hope the next chapter comes quick!! =D
Treble Clef Julianne
2002-08-04
ch 4,
abuseThe song really is fitting. ^_^

And I'm glad Panda's all right, the end of chapter three scared me. ^^
Treble Clef Julianne
2002-08-04
ch 3,
abuseWho - or what - is Shandra? And how could someone do something so awful to poor Panda? ;.;

Finally this great chapter is showing up on FFN. ^_^
Morbane
2002-07-31
ch 3,
abuseNice setting. Neat how you started with a kind of a guide-book extract. You never follow existing formulas for mini-plots *grin*.

Grass/Steel? What an interesting combination!

Wow, she battles *violently*.

Go Trine!
Morbane
2002-07-27
ch 2,
abuseVery very cool. Noooooo, it is NOT pathetic. I'd say fantastic. The comment of my friend Chenloeth, who is reading this with me, was "How does anyone write that well?" and I am quoting directly. Right, Chenloeth?

C: It's so *cute*!

M: That's the Panmaro. I agree. By the way, what happened to Amana? Is she still waiting for the other egg to hatch?

More of Vampireon, it's cool. (Draculeon?)

C: So is Professor Hemlock incredibly eevil... and amazingly... woeful?

M: sigh.

Please write more of this before you get back to school!! (Submits review to a background noise of "Eeeeeevil... eeeeeevil!" Chenloeth again)
Treble Clef Julianne
2002-07-27
ch 2,
abuseAww, a panda Pokemon!!! They should make one, it would be so cute. ^_^ And a Vampireon would be really cool.

Very interesting story, not at all a typical new-trainer fic. ^_^ I like it a lot.

And.... *sweatdrop* Sorry, but I don't have enough time right now to read the rest of your updated fics. ^^ So don't worry about not getting reviews for them from me very quickly. ^^
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