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i like it :D

very different twist, but it was interesting.. i actually went back and re-read parts of it when i got to the part about james mark cause i thought i had mis read something...

great job!

... whoa. Now, there's a weird, creepy, but pretty cool twist ...

Interesting twist, how James is a death eater. Wasn't expecting that. I like you story, it's one of a kind.

Godric's Moor?Great story but...I thouught it was Godric's Hallow?

Your writing is outstanding. If you don't go on to publish something I will be absolutely astounded. When you do email me. I will by a first edition.

Wow, that was surprising but it worked well, are you gonna write some more stuff from before cos that 'brothers' idea is great, how'd it work?

**waves banner with Lady Erised (SP?)on it) YAY! It was wonderful! I laughed! I cried! I...THROUGH BY BROTHER OUT THE ROOM! YEAH!

I never would thought James and Severus friends..even concideres themselves as brothers or something like that. And please excuse my spelling! I am looking at the keyboard and trying to see how fast I can type this..

WRITE MORE!This is the frirst fic I have read that belonged to you...I am now your servent.

**bows down**

S-A

HhahA I got into your secret liare! you read me a story! yea! I want more bedtyime stories. YOu've started something-you realize this right. Anyways, haha again you never thought I'd figure it out.

Wicked! That totally messed with my mind. James? No, you're kiddin' me? You do have a vivid imagination, my friend. Crazy, but one hell of a good short fic.

Sara

Wow - James a death eater? Great idea, and I love your writing. :)

(Juliane really is my author ID, but the site won't let me login yet...bummer.)

Anyway - twisted story! Who'd've guessed James was a Death Eater? I love this!

Would you consider writing more and turning it into a full-length fic? Or maybe just adding a few more scenes to it? This is a terrific idea! :-)

that was such an awesome take on snape & james! um...i can't think of anything else to say, but that was great and i hope you write more in the future!

Nice twist. I like the flow of the writing and the way things are not spelled out in endless dialogue and flashback!

You write well. This is interesting how James was a Death Eater.

wow! you really like angst stuff don't you? but you wee right, I really did like it,, that's so weird though, to think of James as a death eater.