  Whitetigerpaws4Ever 11/7/11 . chapter 3 Y R UR CHAPTERS SOOOOO SHORT? |
 Mysteryfan17 6/15/11 . chapter 12Well this one broke 30 that's for sure. Yes short (and I read fast anyway) but it still managed to get my heart pounding. Plus...a completed multichapter story...nice. 5/5 |
| kagome04 3/9/11 . chapter 8 really really good. good suspense. but why so short? it should be longer! |
| StarKidKlaineTrickster 12/17/10 . chapter 12 Yay! Happy ending! |
| storycreater10 9/4/10 . chapter 12 REALLY REALLY GREAT! I LOVE THE WRITING THAT YOU DO IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOOO FANTASTIC! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
| anakinlove 6/11/10 . chapter 12 very good story, but short chapters are torture |
| only-one-of-my-kind-7 2/15/10 . chapter 12 we I love Robin torture! |
| nrstrenth 9/14/09 . chapter 12 good story. felt compelled to continue reading. "robin torture?" I will think of soemthing. |
| nrstrenth 9/12/09 . chapter 12 good story. I love your topics/characters. Keep up the good work. |
| Princess613 8/27/09 . chapter 12 Torture for Robin...Hm...I think give Bruce a two-faced girlfriend who hates Dick...and is smart enough to hide it from Bruce. Bruce stops Dick from being Robin...Dick does it anyway...you can take it from there. |
| Princess613 8/27/09 . chapter 10 Makes sense, they certainly share other genetic traits and B blood is fairly common. |
| Princess613 8/27/09 . chapter 6 Didn't Bruce just say he wouldn't leave? |
| Princess613 8/27/09 . chapter 3 The story DOES get better. I knew it would... the other chapters weren't up to your usual standards. |
| Lizzy 5/2/09 . chapter 12 Love the story! I love the father-son moments, well done |
| tinyurl 1/3/09 . chapter 12 Like the story, but gosh your chapters are short! |
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