It was a good plot but I thought it was kinda of poorly written. At first it had. Good pace but then around chapter 4 it started to become too fast and rushed. Also it seemed that you didn't know what to write.

Just a little constructive critisim although I feel like I'm trashing you.

luv the story

I like this story alot. I'm a big fan of HirokixMisaki. But now with Young!Misaki I think it's adorable. Can't wait to read more, please update soon.

I thought you were a guy...

Am I the only yaoi fanboy?

I swear every fanfic is by a girl.

is the sequel still about misaki and hiroki?

LOL. and im just a poor, 12 year old with a yaoi addiction who needs special help. [since i was 9] LOLOLOLOLOL.

Awwwwwww! -coes at the couple- It is soooooo cute! Though in all truth I would've never really expected this pairing, but for right now I like the pairing! Also I love how you used a lot of stuff they had in the manga/anime, because it makes it seem like "Yeah this could've actually happened" Oh wow I rant too much. ANYWAY please update whenever you can.

nuooooooooooooooooo misaki! hiro-san!

Hi. I'm one of those "pissed off fanigrls" you were talking about.

...

though 'm not exactly pissed off, just a little irritated.

ANYWAY, you should have added more! Neh! I. Said. NEH!

you're probably getting sick of me reviewing by now. But this story was super cute. Poor Hiroki can't go hime and Misaki is gonna be all angsty cuz everyone he loves is dead or leaving him. is he going to reappear in the sequel or is it gonna be all egoist?

have to go to class now so i'll try to read it later today or tomorrow

Cheyanne

Hiroki is so messed up inside...i love it. And i like the part where Usagi actually finds out everything. I wonder what's going to happen now?

Cheyanne

hahaha, poor Hiroki can't fool Misaki. (sorry i haven't reviewed in so long) I love the randomness of that conversation at the bottom. so silly. okay, off to read the next two chapters

Cheyanne

Misaki can guess that Hiroki loved him? Woah... What a perceptive kid. It made me love him too, hehe.

It never occured to my wildest imaginatio that Hiroki would confess his undying love for his best friend.

Such a short chapter, but I already read the reason.

See ya!

Yay! Finally Hiroki meets Nowaki.

Well, I'm not sure if my review (s) will make it reach 50 or not, but I'll give you some. I also write for this fandom but I've decided to take an early retirement,

Honestly, you did very good, well, great actually, in building the storyline, plot and characterization. I feel sorry for Nowaki for running away from Misaki though I understand the reasons behind it. Many will critize him for loving a second grader. And most will consider him as a pedophile for having such affection towards Misaki. But it's also nice to peek into Hiroki's consideration and thoughts about the issue.