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Kerry 4/9/10 . chapter 1 Perfect Dark: Good. Red hair: Good. Names that start with K: Good. Where'd the towels come from? Haha. I imagine the daughter of Cassandra de Vries would have some grunt worker running out of the shadows to clean up her spills. And I can't see her putting her bazillion-dollar(or whatever) purse on the floor. And that she'd be a bit more dry-icy and haughty. Pretty much like her mother, I guess. I'm sure her character will be fleshed out more in further chapters and these behaviors will make fine sense, though, of course. Nice start. Will check for updates. Please continue. |