|Reviews for Demonsoul|
| MurthursFollower 3/30/13 . chapter 2
This looks like it will be a really great story! I love it so far!
Did Ron kill Peter? Can Dumbldore and McGonagall suddenly burst into the room because they felt a huge release of dark magic in the school? If Harry was restrained in a dungeon because Proffesser Snape thought he might be possessed by Voldemort that would be cool... And then a death eater could come along and kidnap Harry and Hermionie then crucio Hermionie... (Wow that is some evil ideas) ...
Good luck writing the story!
| cethmistmyk 12/26/12 . chapter 2
Hmmm... This is very interesting, I do wish you'd continue! :-)
I think Harry is too accepting of what he is though...
It's good though!
| Primus2021 10/9/12 . chapter 2
Roland Weasel or BumbleWhore.
| RAJ 8/7/12 . chapter 2
i liked your story. I am desperately waiting for its update so please hurry up...
| raje 7/27/12 . chapter 2
i like the story and am waiting for the update.
| amjm89 11/1/11 . chapter 2
Its great and I hope you finish it when you have the time.
| dragonprincess3 5/9/11 . chapter 2
very interesting concept. I hope to see an update soon.
my guess for orange death lightning attack is Voldemort. or mabye, Ron sucked up the excess power from harry, being one of the first 'suggested' people. By 'suggested' i mean the jedi mind trick harry keeps using. or for a really interesting twist, hogwarts herself attacks! ...In order to stop Harry from demolishing parts of the castle in anger. hmm well mabye not, cause then harry sould have to demolish parts of hogwarts anyway.
anywho, thats me done. Good luck with future chapters!
| WhiteElfElder 2/28/11 . chapter 2
Interesting. The story summary made me think Harry woukd be nothing but a skin suit. It would either be DumbDumb, Quirrel, or Snape...my vote is on Snape. I feel sorry for whomever did this and whomever kept Harry and Sirius apart once Harry finds out.
| Ahjffjdkdj 2/5/11 . chapter 2
o come on update
| jabbarulez 1/8/11 . chapter 2
Bravo! hehe... harem... more please!
| Shaliii 12/27/10 . chapter 1
Sqeeeeeeee! Love it :p wow how did u come up with that plot?:) hope u write more
| Lord Sia 10/23/10 . chapter 1
Looked sort of promising... But once again, we fall into the trap of "Ancient, somehow never-seen-before yet well known as the Most Powerful" yadda yadda, both with power and creatures here. It would have been enough to simply make Harry some sort of monster - far better if, rather than quickly browsing through Diagon for books on his nigh-unique nature, he'd have to search through Hogwart's library for weeks to find merely legend and myth. Rather than the goblins bending over backwards because he's a pseudo-mythical ruler of their kind, have them afford a very powerful non-human customer some respect - or better yet, don't. Rather than making him both physically powerful and capable of mind control, pick one or the other unless you can consistently tie them to the change. It becomes more interesting if he can't just steamroll over every problem with his new abilities - leaving the mother and son to spread the rumour of some daemon of the night, protecting the innocent, having him threaten the Dursleys into submission rather than mindfucking them... Perhaps have him "noticing" that Hermione is a girl and grow awkward because of it, instead of having the Super-Familiar point out their soulbond and suddenly have them dating right out of the blue?
Just some ideas for a better fic, IMO.
| shunshinking 9/3/10 . chapter 2
THAT MAY BE TRUE BUT I HAVE A FEELING THAT WHAT HAPPENED TO PETTIGREW WAS PROBRABLY DUMBLEDOR WHO IS TRYING TO CONTROL HARRY. BUT WITH THE SUPPORT OF THE GOBLINS AND OTHER DEMONIC CREATURES HARRY IS GOING TO BE VERY SCARY WHEN HE GETS REALLY PISSED OFF.
| Sephiroth owns u all 8/5/10 . chapter 2
Awesome story please continue
| TaylorMyaTaylorMya 7/4/10 . chapter 2
HMMMMM I LIKE THIS! MEOW