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   Beloved Daughter 1/29/11 . chapter 13Interesting story. I look forward to seeing on how you plan to complete this story. |
| Hawklan 1/27/11 . chapter 13 _*Chapter Eleven*_ ohaa...can I shoot the Dursley's pleassseee? and got the Horcrux in Harry is gone _*Chapter Twelve*_ nice that the Horcruxes are all destroyed and finally the Dementors were good for something *g* uhh I should think you should fix Dumbledorks statement that James and Lilly were sorted into Gryffindor 12 years ago. Lilly would have been 12 or 13 then when she got Harry and only in her 2nd or 3rd year *g*... ohh Dumbledork finally came out with the truth, just a little to late *g* and Harry has a date...wow *g* evil way to end the chapter... _*Chapter Thirteen*_ how I would have loved to see Snape while he was reading that article *g* uhh didn't Harry had a butterbeer with Mac while brewing the potion? hmm if that is the end of the story thanks for sharing, but I wouldn't mind to see some more. |
| Hawklan 1/26/11 . chapter 10 ahh nice idea from Harry I just wonder what aftereffects had hid him now and Dumbles tries again... |
| Hawklan 1/26/11 . chapter 9 *Chapter Four* ahh nice fate for the Dursley's and nice of Nicholas to offer this help for Hermione. _*Chapter Five*_ good Fudge dismissed Albus like that *g* nice how Harry has helped Luna _*Chapter Six*_ nice how it all turned out for Luna and Umbridge...ahhhhh damn toad. _*Chapter Seven*_ wow...way to go Tonks *g* phew good they caught Lockhardt and nice how Sirius has reacted to Malfoy ohaa who ever did that to Harry at the end (Malfoy I guess) should run fast. _*Chapter Eight*_ ahh good Nichoals pulled Harry out and he should file charges against Dumbledork for trying to keep Harry there. _*Chapter Nine*_ wow..Ron actually did something and it helped *g* uhaa a shame about Nicolas and his wife, but I'm not surprised that Harry came to the right conclusion. |
| hatten-jc 1/25/11 . chapter 3 nice Dursley tormenting *g* and nice that they adopted him. |
| hatten-jc 1/25/11 . chapter 2 ahh nice fate for the Dursleys and the gall of Dumbledork...unbelivable |
| hatten-jc 1/25/11 . chapter 1 nice start and yes this summer with the Flamels will be good for Harry |
| Jarius A Black 1/20/11 . chapter 13 yay good chapter!Polyjuice Potion in order to sneak into the girls dormitories? I love it! |
| Jarius A Black 1/20/11 . chapter 12 Awesome chapter. Voldy is dead. and Harry has a date. A couple minor errors: The two sat down in the living room and Harry told the story of seeing his descendant. Your parents were both sorted into Gryffindor twelve years ago. "I know you're dying and that your stocks of elixir of life is useless because the stone is destroyed," It should say ancester. 12 was probably a typo also. the other should be are useless. |
| Jarius A Black 1/20/11 . chapter 11 Ignotus Peverell, good plot point. |
| Jarius A Black 1/20/11 . chapter 10 Awesome chapter. |
| Jarius A Black 1/20/11 . chapter 9 Yay TLOTR references. |
| Jarius A Black 1/20/11 . chapter 8 Awesome. Like the changes. |
| Jarius A Black 1/20/11 . chapter 7 Tonks rules. Lockhart should be castrated. Yay no Umbridge and Lucius Malfoy. Glad you brought Daphne and Tracey into the story. |
| Jarius A Black 1/20/11 . chapter 6 yay Sirius |
