you are the Ravy queen. Great job!

Wow, the polar bears had me coughing in laughter. Haha, Rachel was such a coward, but she was courageous. I love how you built the tension up with the flirtatious comments and body language.

This is one of the best happy Ravy fics ever!

I can't believe I haven't gotten around to reading this before :D

I just have so many nice things to say about it I can't think of them all XD

Have I mentioned recently that you're my favourite? :)

Yet again you write how the books should have! You are an amazing writer!

Great fic, thank u so much.

Everytime i get ticked off at what happens in the books i read a fic like this.

The world would b a depressing place without fanfiction.

I so love your Rachel/Ivy ficlets. Please continue to write many more.

-Berry

I'm sad to see it end, but I do love the ending.

-Kate

Ooooo... That was an amazing end, and an excellent story in general, one of the best lemon chapters I've read to date, perfect amount of action, and dialogue. You once again astound me with your writing abilities :) keep up the good work!

:) wonderful!

I hope you write another Rachel/Ivy fiction, a very very long one cause your writing is amazing and I can't get enough :)

Again, wondeful I say!

Shoot..wish this happened in the actual story instead of KH being a tease with them lol great final chapter.

This was amazing. If and when the series ends on a depressing note for us Rachel/Ivy shippers, the first thing I am going to do is come back and read this (or any of your other stories). It's the written equivalent of comfort food - the Death by Chocolate of fics. Thanks for posting, and I really hope you write Rachel/Ivy again some day because you do amazing things with those two.

I really love them together XD

I have loved this story from the start and I love how you ended it. You are a great writer.

...this, THIS is how the books should be! Mercy! Well done as usual, Fembuck.