|Reviews for May and His December|
| Lady Dragona 3/6/10 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. I love how you make Alice's vision come true even if it is a little late. I love that Edward has finally meets Bella and decides that he wants to keep her with him for as long as he can.
| kathi773 3/6/10 . chapter 1
It's almost 4am and i'm trying to justify not calling my sister to wake up and read this story. You have truly an amazing talent.
| KnittedSpecks 3/5/10 . chapter 1
That was totally awesome! You had me laughing in the middle and crying by the end. Thank you for sharing the story.
| wistful-amibitions 3/5/10 . chapter 1
Very funny, yet sad at the same time. Only you could pull this combination off. )
| Mell C 3/5/10 . chapter 1
An interesting twist on what might have happened to Bella had Edward got his wish that she remain human and live a life without him. Poignant and funny. Became quite sad in thinking about them missing each other that first time around. And while you caution about stereotypes about the elderly, thanks for challenging our ageist ideas that only the young are worthy of love.
| moon shadow 31 3/5/10 . chapter 1
ok... I find this story hysterical. My family is looking at me like I am nuts. This is a very imaginative story. I could just picture the characters acting like this. Please continue it.
| moojuicey 3/5/10 . chapter 1
Thanks for writing something different. Definitely enjoyable. :)
| xlovestory 3/5/10 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this - it was nice to read something completely different. I enjoyed the idea that Edward had never found Bella, and that Alice hasn't always been right. Though I was a little disappointed that something couldn't happen between them, your great writing and wit which you put into the characters made up for it. What would be cool would be so see if you could make something out of this? Maybe you could write an alternative (Edward actually finds Bella - evn if she was pregnant with Mike's child) or, something along the lines of reincarnation, which you briefly mentioned? But other than that, I really loved it. Great job!
| marteloise 3/5/10 . chapter 1
I love it!Very original and well-written even if I was nearly crying by the end. Thanks for sharing it withh us!
| Edwardluvr 3/4/10 . chapter 1
I would love for this to continue and have her die and be reincarnated and remember him miraculously or something!
| Zynda 3/4/10 . chapter 1
Wow. That was delightful and sad. Or delightfully sad, as the case may be. Either way, a wonderful, definitely different, and thoroughly well written piece. Thank You!
| Crispy Anakin 3/4/10 . chapter 1
It started out like I was reading crack but I ended teary eyed. Why are you so talented? Fantastic job as always.
| jasperFiend 3/4/10 . chapter 1
AW THIS COULD HAVE BEEN SO OOGY BUT YOU PULLED IT OFF SO WONDERFULLY, BELLA SNARKY AND EDWARDS SNARKINESS WAS PRICELESS, ITS 11ISH HERE THE HOUSE IS ASLEEP BUT I WOULD HAVE WAKED THEM ALL UP WITH MY LAUGHING BUT I GOT A GRIP.
WONDERFUL JOB WONDERFUL STORY
| Demosthenes91 3/4/10 . chapter 1
Ohmigod you're gonna make me cry at karaoke! I should know better than to read any of your stuff when I'm in my period - I'm far too emotional as it is and then you go with all your fucking brilliance, pushing all my buttons...
you suck...like, in the best way ever.
Of course I loved it, as if I wouldn't. Besides the absolution that they bring one another, I like this take on Alice - how she struggles with slowly becoming a 'normal' vampire and trying to prove herself. I love the snark in Bella and how that's her version of a shield. And Edward - geez. Nothing but bad choices and he lost his chance.
Absolution. It's beautiful and sad and you just kill me every damn time.
Gah! HAPPY NOW?
| Jezebel Whitlock 3/4/10 . chapter 1
SHE MARRIED MIKE NEWTON? Fuck, Poor Bella. Her life must have been miserable. I loved this story. Bella and Edward are so sweet together, even if she is an old woman. Loved it.