Awe what a shame I didn't get to go to your party lol jk. Great story, very interesting story line, I really enjoyed it. Great job!

OMG, that was totally awesome! I really liked it! Is this a one shot?

PS I know Silverbellsb, your friend! Don't tell her I told you!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhh that's so cute! Hey, I've been reading a lot of your writing recently and I don't mean anything in an offensive way, but it's very annoying when you write "&" instead of a simple "and"

anyways, love! :)

ooh its really good

:)

Wow, I'm reading "Identity" the sequel to this, and I absolutely love it! It's so sad, and well-writen. I can imagine it playing through my head! Wonderful job!

Anita

WOW! That was amazing! I JUST started reading, and I already love it! I'm going to read chapter two now, but you are an amazing writer! I am so jealous! You really have a talent! Keep up the great work! Oh yeah, and by the way, thank you for reviewing on my story! :)

Anita

Very good! I see now you are developing the idea of James being the lost son of John Smith and Pocahontas in your new story.

The story of Pocahontas casts such a powerful spell ...

Aww, very cute! I liked this story a lot, it isn't bad. It's much better than your first story on this site.. I know you are trying harder with your writing.

And Happy Birthday!

Sorry, too lazy to sign in. Great job and interesting plot! Your translation has gotten better, still a few problems here and there but this story was a great success. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more stories like this from you. Please feel free to email me if you ever need a beta or need to ask a question. Congratulations on a good story.