More, *please?*

I like this story. I kinda got confused at the beginning of the first chapter though. Is this the family of bio-machine people? Cuz I can't remember.

Love the two chapters! More, please?

...wow. That was awesome. Great writing style, great story, you're coming out with chapter 2 soon, right?

Saw a fic with my name, so I had to check it out. Other than a few minor syllabobbles, this is pretty good. Definately worth keeping an eye out for more.

more?