  george
2008-10-03 . chapter 2 More, *please?* |
 BGR
2003-04-13 . chapter 2I like this story. I kinda got confused at the beginning of the first chapter though. Is this the family of bio-machine people? Cuz I can't remember. |
Ski
2002-05-05 . chapter 2 Love the two chapters! More, please? |
Naphtali Phoenix
2002-02-21 . chapter 1....wow. That was awesome. Great writing style, great story, you're coming out with chapter 2 soon, right? |
 Ghost in the Machine
2002-02-18 . chapter 1Saw a fic with my name, so I had to check it out. Other than a few minor syllabobbles, this is pretty good. Definately worth keeping an eye out for more. |
jo
2002-02-02 . chapter 1 more? |
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