AKI!

AHAHAHAHA! LAKJDKSHDBSAKJBFAKJGF EFUBIUEFB!1!ONEONEONE!11!

. . .FAVES.

HAHAHAHA! YANNO, IT'S QUITE ODD FOR ME TO USE CAPSLOCK ON REVIEWS BUT THIS ONE MADE ME! SHANNARO! XD LOL!

HAHA. THE WAY HOW TOUSHIRO CORRECTS KARIN MADE ME LAUGH, LITERALLY AND SERIOUSLY! OVER HAHAHA! THE ZANPA- WHAT? HAHAHA!

BACK THERE I WISHED I WAS KARIN 8,D -NOSEBLEED-

HITSUGAYA-TAICHOU... NO, WAIT. TOUSHIRO PWNED ICHIGO KUROSAKI'S SISTER. OHOHO XD

im not gonna give one of those review i actually kinda liked it it was like... innocently good XD i have no idea y but thats the first thing that came to my mind " either way i rly liked it XD

four stars for sure

4*

but it wouldnt kill to make a sequel jk kinda ;)

LOL! Haha! It's cute. Seriously, I found it cute! )) Nice job. Well done! Hwahahahaha! But I wonder why did you put '' at your tsk-ed word ))

Kidding ;D Wuv you

minahoru/Aisha.

For almost half-a-year of not reading and most of all reviewing any fanfic.. I'm back..? I think? hehe

I loved this cute fluff! It saved my broken heart, really (note: manga). This pairing was like an oasis for me, since I'm losing hope with Hinamori. And I really liked that episode too!

All in all, it was great! For me, it wasn't OOC.. Coz, Hitsu-sama really do have a short temper. And Karin is a very funny girl..? with all her indirect insults with him. I also liked the idea of Karin daring Hitsu-sama of his prowess? lolz And the idea of flying was well connected! But maybe the end part was a bit too fast..? Hehehe.. And I can't imagine Hitsu-sama doing those things yet.. but well, maybe in the near future? hahaha!

Thanks for writing this! And keep on writing! Miss yah and all of the IU pipz 3

Heh, nice work on this. Well done. Keep at it.

you'll be surprised at how many hitsukarin fans there are around...there are quite A LOT (and sometimes i think there are moe hitsukarin fans than hitsuhina)

so don't be worried :D

Hitsuhina is just cannon for bro/sis relationship.

Toushiro NEVER said anything about "loving" her in a romantic way, so tome, hitsuhina is just about as convincing as hitsumatsu (holy forbid):runs from angry fangirls, dogdes flying knives:

Besides Karin does suit him better :D

Cute story, and way to go to start with hitsukarin too!

hope to see you write more!

(BTW, come join the hitsukarin-fanclub in deviantart :D)

Hmm... while it isn't bad... it kind of shows one isn't comfortable with the show, due to how much they know about it. It's rough around the edges, and doesn't exactly flow from one point to another. It is like a big, wush! And then it is over, and one thinks... what just happened. I mean... think of this fact, in the first line, she asks about his mother, yet he doesn't even think to comment on that, and the possible insult. I mean... he doesn't really have one, does he?

never found the appeal of sparkling vampires, but i wont hold that against you :) but i rather think of them both as hotheads. hothead hothead SPARK! XD, besides, she's afraid of hollows, big strong ones :D

Well that was not bad for a first time. Sure they kind of are OOC but that was to be expected, and you did warn me, so yeah.

But ignoring those facts, it was pretty sweet, and so cute. I just love HitsuKarin (take that HitsuHina! xD)!

HK

Yaay! The ending was great. I told you to watch Bleach. XD

I'm not pretty familiar with the characters so I can't say anything about characterization. BUT in my opinion, you did very well for a first time :) I think you get them IN character.

So yeah, hope to see more stories from you! Next time make it HitsuHina ne? Good luck!